iceCREAMcheezcake vs Indonesia - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Length: 16 Lines

iceCREAMcheezcake (0%)

Basic Member

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Reppin: San Antonio, Texas, United States

Indonesia (100%) WINNER

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Reppin: Indonesia

iceCREAMcheezcake

there's no 1 hit k.o's in this sport you gotta keep coming. 
if you jump on the track you gotta keep running. 
you in the wrong game, you need to change you're lane and change your name. you're lame. get that into your brain, or into your knee. im bomb like Sadam, i'll control these votes like tyranny. are you hearing me? 
i'll rock your world till you hear deaftones, call them head stones,
 ill blow your mind. you just bowing time. i'm blowing lime, rollin mine. 
i'm serving beef you need to go inline.
 before i roll a blade across your sholder blade and hold your spine. fatality, your dead, face reality. this aint sega, you cant button mash a punch here. you need keys and alcohol with puns dear. 
i'll grab a lama, ruin his groove and send bambi back to his moma. fuck drama, you trying to play. you aint tricking no one, i seen you on Broadway, quit lying you gay. being a rapper is really an act. some one quick he has no bars, throw him a zanax. this man whack. say he can ball, i threw him a pitch but he cant bat.

Indonesia

you think that OPEN IS DOPE???? bro you seemed more "anxious" than cancer HOPING YOU SMOKE! the hottest your rhymes will be is barely POKING THE SMOKE! ok.. ill just kill dude with a TIGHT CLEAN SHOT so have him "freeze up" cause i deliver "punches so cold" they MIGHT SEEM HOT! this killing gets "old" so the weapon might have some SLIGHT BEAM ROT this fag is "socially awkward" so they gave him a RIGHT-WING SLOT! (right wing politics) now we know his rhymes are HIT AND MISS but i'll "lay the smackdown" on this hoe with the SCISSORS KICK (wrestling move) he prollly bit his lines anyway... watch em get repo'd, LIZARD LICK! next time SPIT WITH INTENTION i GRIP THE EXTENSION  only time homie "ridin high?" is when i FLIP THE SUSPENSION! i stay CLASSICK WITH KEYS "my print stay 100 on the paper" like i MASTERED THE TREES! you tryin ta run with me? i SHATTERED HIS KNEES! ya BASIC WITH TEXT... hold on... lemme reload my sniper... just "take the bullet" FACE IT! WHO'S NEXT?



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Battle started: October 4^th 2013 at 01:16
Challenger joined: October 4^th 2013 at 01:27

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-10-04 01:27:40).

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iceCREAMcheezcake Basic Member	was for this nsx guy but he don't spit on my level i dont think, so disgard my first punch. Comment Only Posted on: 2013-10-04 01:17:24
padded cell Basic Member	not much to say,fairs in, though the loser has improved some, good effort Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-04 05:33:38
Manhattan <LoD> Grand Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Clear winner here tbh. One overall has a greatest grasp on what it takes to use the box (Multis,Punches etc) Loser could take notes and learn from this you need to try to set up your verse like that. Fairs in low to high Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-05 00:17:58
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT King Concept Champion	My winner here came with a more consistently stronger ryme scheme.. and disses.. other a bit too basic for my tastes.. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-05 06:23:26
Tony The TYGER Live Battler	fairs in Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-05 17:09:38
I AM EGO Basic Member	Obvious winner but why even take it? Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-05 23:56:41
NappyVereen Basic Member	HeathN the structure and set up wasn't that good he was rhyming but nothing stuck to me hard hitting wise. Indonesia had a great set up with the bold and the ending lines, not enough punches or aggression but he definitely won this battle. NappyVereen Comment Only Posted on: 2013-10-06 17:37:18
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT King Concept Champion	4-2 vote deleted upon indo's request. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-06 18:08:18
MJH Basic Member	fv Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-06 19:32:28
The Dope Man	one def took it..but still needs work..fvs in.. ~1~ Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-06 20:50:46
Ill Phenom	HeathN: Very very simplistic and basic punches. I don't think there was a punch in the whole verse that wasn't generic. But overall you were actually consistent with punch attempts, I didn't see too much filler, it was all just very simple though. Even the rhyme scheme was basic. But it did flow well.. The main thing to work on is your being a bit more creative when both rhyming, and picking out your concepts that you want to use. I would suggest trying to get a little bit of build up or set up before your punches so they come off stronger and have some kind of connection... Indonesia: Many of the punches here were pretty light IMO, but I realize you were just taking it for the easy win as it says your verse 'you think that open is dope'?... lol .. You used smoke as a rhyme back to back and there were a few spots you used filler and self glory. I wouldn't suggest writing these bullshit verse to put a battle out, or get the easy win. Come hard in every battle you do.. No one wants to read a snipe tbh.. The flow was good in your also. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:27:51
Erupt <LoD> 2x Hall of Famer Grand Champion Topical Champion Tag Team Champion	one was just overall better here, still needs to work on his wording and structure, the other had a smooth read but needs to get a little more complex overall... pz Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / Indonesia Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:38:18


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