pubescent kids/middle school. u get it.. thoughts of being together.. cull means to get rid of something already rejected, hence, cull ah/color scheme..some ref in Brazil was decapped for killing a soccer player, hence, kick outta dis.. G'luck ET. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-03 14:35:23

fairs in Voted: WarSand / ET the Refugee
Posted on: 2013-10-05 16:55:26

LAWD: Only bar I thought was decent in this verse was the closer (Concept wise). I really felt this was the worse verse I have read from you, from the battles that I have voted on. The opener was awkwardly written and the punch didn't come off very well.. "Your thoughts be together" and "I'll bring characters ta life" is more about what your doing, rather than dissing your opponent. Just too much inconsistency there... Stay away from the filler nad continue to be direct when your attacking your oppponent. I feel like the main reason for that in this verse was the lack of creative concepts and direction you brought to this battle. The one direct concept, and punch you had (closer), was okay.. ET: You were just a tad more consistent IMO, but for the most part your overall punch execution and the concepts you brought to this one were making many of those punches fall short. Your closer was nice also, direct and I like the personal that you brought there. Overall this battle was close ass shit, this is definitely a coin flip here.. Even with the two bars I thought were good closer for closer, I thought one had the better creative and concept but hte others' was more direct and personal, and was a bit smoother written. votes in. Voted: WarSand / ET the Refugee
Posted on: 2013-10-08 08:02:07

This was indeed close battle..Lawdy lawd, started off to wordy and jumbled but i thought u finished stronger and your creativity goes to show your takin time to add that smartness which brings out originality. ET definitly flowed nicer, set-up to punches more consise and simply explained but thats whwere u lost me a bit in the ismplisticness of the punches, nice flow however...good work Voted: WarSand / ET the Refugee
Posted on: 2013-10-09 23:14:42