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Posted on: 2013-10-02 04:51:30

decent-ary Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-02 17:38:26

***reads one at a time, expos, rates, reads next verse**** Macc:: you carried the scheme really well although your first bar sounded a little forced with DAME BLOWS FEENS i feel like you could have tightened it up a bit more and delivered better there. some of your set-ups were irrelevant to your punches but the punches were above average here, good job. Overall a pretty solid verse. Illokwent:you came hard here too. you kept the scheme going well and had a nice flow along with it. my favorite line from you was "when FACIN ME, this 'G let's the metal cut you down' witout SHAVING CREAM followed by RAZOR SWEEPS" your set-ups seemed more relevant than your opponent here. i also thought your wordplay came across better. this was a really close battle, closer than i thought it would be, but imma score it a mid-high. fair's in.... holla atcha boy Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-03 02:45:41

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Posted on: 2013-10-03 22:13:40

fv Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-04 00:05:29

yeh good spar. mac --- you're gradually improvin your multies tie-in together nicely. I was quite impressed by your chess bar, but other than that it was cliche after cliche. If anythin just be more direct you're drifting off with 'like this' and 'like that'...feel me? Ill --- i like that you keep the bars relevant, its tough but u doin it well. that painters deed bar was a good concept but it felt stretched. that make hoes bleed seemed a bit played out to me, you didn't make it as conspicuous as others but a better build out would have made it better... final bar was probably your best. Good spar overall, one was more consistent here and got my vote..stay up Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-04 03:23:24

MaCc: You did pretty well with following your scheme and it all flowed well. As far as the punches in this one, they had good concepts and decent wording, I just didn't feel that real 'ohh' factor in them at all. But the verse was solid and consistent. ILL: Scheme and flow was nice from you also. I liked that opening bar. The rest was reaching out to grab the above par typa punches.. I thought you were a bit more direct then your opponent in this one also. Overall this was a pretty good scheme battle to read. I have my winner. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-10-05 05:45:22