Lmao! CliCc CliCc BANGGG! PoLo!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-30 09:33:33

Its the #PoLoGang,you bitches Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-30 09:48:10

My winner here has original bars. No played out disses. Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-09-30 17:33:24

winner has better punches Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-09-30 23:35:43

Simmons: First things, first, you are going to have to work on fixing up your flow a bit. Word your line so they come off a smooth and make sure none of your multi's are broken because there were a bunch I noticed in your verse that were. Punchwise was nothing dramatic either, it was very very basic with little to no set up here. Be a bit more creative and original.. Be direct when your attacking your opponent.. THUG: Opening line dope wordplay, could have been crack too, but the end punch on that line fell off from the set up.. Hard with text/start to melt, doesn't rhyme IMO, bad multi', bad flow, the "your verses whacks" doesn't make gramamtical sense on there either, don't just throw an S on a word so you can make wordplay, if sound fucked up, it's not going to work anyways... I really like the 'window of opportunity' concept, nice. Closer could have been better, seemed pretty basic to me.. Just be a bit more consistent, and stay away from wording bars like your second one. Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-10-01 08:27:58

:€ Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-10-01 12:20:45

edged it, loser had some good ideas though keep writing, fairs in Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-10-03 06:57:12

to me battling is about goin after someone or what they have written, not issuing prefabricated lines that could be used on anyone, at least curtail them towards the opponent..like simmons didnt claim to be a Cool B or a Frikkin G or an A-B-A-C-A-B-B (hed claim that if macc battled em though cause itd be a bloodbath) who knows what i mean wit that huh? crazy bastards Voted: Simmons / NatsHubby
Posted on: 2013-10-03 08:18:09