The winner did a tad better IMO... Voted: The Dope Man / allEGOrise
Posted on: 2013-09-30 21:56:25

Tha Dope Man: Your verse flowed well and I didn't find anything wrong with the multi usage, but that's about it. The punches were very unoriginal and basic. They lacked any umph or nice concept to go along with them. Not much of any build or set up for your punches either. Lines like "Spit fire at you" n burn your face.. or like your closer are just wayy too generic to be throwing out in your battles. Be more creative and direct. Also stay away from filler lines cause that's one thing I noticed you had much of here. allEGOrise: you started off with a couple cool concepts, I actually thought you had a chance to take this battle and then about midway through your verse took a nose dive and stopped saying anything relevant tbh. There were a few attampts in that second half where it seemed like you tried to give it some direction as a punch but it just wasn't working with the way you worded everything. So definitely work on consistency and wording of your punches here. Stay attacking your opponent and make yoru lines relevant with each other. Voted: The Dope Man / allEGOrise
Posted on: 2013-10-01 08:37:13

Easy for winner, i like the creativity, loser was too generic for me. Voted: The Dope Man / allEGOrise
Posted on: 2013-10-03 11:16:25

One took it because of flow and structure. Dope Man had some alright punches and I can tell allEGOrise was trying to land em, that opener was nice, but you fell off later. Fv. Voted: The Dope Man / allEGOrise
Posted on: 2013-10-03 21:19:20

Consistency was key here. Both had their fair share of issues but also their fare sure of nice punches. It was close but im leaning this way.... Voted: The Dope Man / allEGOrise
Posted on: 2013-10-05 18:59:03