Typo: HOES AND GAYFERS Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-29 20:33:02

i'll get at this when i get off work Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-30 15:53:34

Ray: you had a real nice swagger. i liked how you carried from line to line and i read your verse really quick which means that you had a great flow. you had good punches too. all you lacked to make this a great verse, to me, was set ups and syllable counts. Good solid verse though. SOAL: you had a good verse here too, but not great either. i felt a lack of effort and it felt rushed? but anyway. you had a good line in there about sunray/son-ray, your other wordplay see-you/sea-food just wasnt working fam. you had a good flow though and some decent punches. i wanna see you be more focused. fair is in mid-mid Voted: Ray Zeus / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2013-10-02 02:51:59

battle like this should not be getting slept on 1 vote TSSS smh PoLo!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-02 07:11:48

both had good ideas, and actually decent flows, both need to work on multis and not having too many syllables, but one edged by the closer... was close as hell/ pz Voted: Ray Zeus / HIGHpothasis
Posted on: 2013-10-04 00:08:56