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Posted on: 2013-09-29 19:53:09

Polo u homo my nigga stay droppin opens. G shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-29 20:51:22

Relevant wording & fluidity helped the winner. Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-09-29 22:08:25

One was a little more clear with the setups, the wordplay from both was forced in spots, both need to try to make it sound as close to the actual word as possible, ones ideas were better overall with better setups, votes in, stay textin my g Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-09-30 01:51:14

my winner came wit a bit better concepts that landed cleaner and his scheme also was polished..other wasnt too far off tho. there was one line i enjoyed which was his closer..fairs in.. Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-09-30 05:18:04

S O A L : nothing standoutish from you, The cushion/cussion wordplay was a bit forced IMO, and the closer had the potential to be nice but the way you worded the end punch didn't do it much justice. You have to make it more smooth for the readers. I didn't see any problems with the flow.. Row: You verse had some pretty decent consistency, and a couple good concepts I liked. There were a few lines in there that lacked the wording though. That supersonic line is an example not one is the way this is worded for the reader 'Super son, ick' awkward.. Overall, in was somewhat close but I definitely had a clear winner. As for elevation, I thought both could use some work on wording there set ups into there punches better.. Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-09-30 15:26:08

nice final Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-10-01 03:03:44

ok SOAL: you started off with some dope lines and like a lot of people you faded out towards the end, your closer wasnt all that nice compared to your opener. my favorite line was "i'll let That 'Drum-Roll-From-The- Couch!!' Thats ONE HEAD PER-CUSSION/cushion! !" that was dope. and the mi-chelle wordplay was kinda off IMO...but a decent verse here. Row: good punches here man. i liked the boozer post up line and the other basketball references. and that last line had me rollin. nice flow, nice punches. set ups a little awkward in some areas but other than that it was a decent verse from you, maybe a little rushed though. fair is in. mid-high ;) Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-10-02 02:22:04

dope battle here Voted: HIGHpothasis /
Posted on: 2013-10-02 03:40:10