...lol. u had to explain all that?? sheesh. i thought i was the genius... haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-28 23:53:37

Go Tyler!! Bro's For Life Dawg!!! -Caccles- Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-28 23:58:45

P.O.LO.. U HOMOS. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-29 00:09:13

i think punches/nameplay took this one by a hair..macc in like the win-tho line, i actually used a similiar line recently..i like the set-ups with the definition scheme but felt like i needed a hard punch at the end of each one..like i said the win-tho being my favorite..punk i liked the nameplay you had going..i had to google drew mcintyre to see who the hell he was though..the closed caption line was also nice..i felt the camo line was a bit of a stretch but it was okay..thanks for the early link n be ez..FLY VOTE CLUB Voted: Thaa MaCc Era /
Posted on: 2013-09-29 02:21:25

MaCc: Your verse flowed well and the multi's were okay. But majority of your punches were very generic and unoriginal, which seems to be a bunch of peoples problem at the moment. Win-Tho/Window, wordplay is kinda iffy, IMO.. Really that's about it. Your verse consistently threw punches in each bar, you just have to step it up with your concepts and the level of your punches... Punk: Only two lines in your verse I didn't feel were up with the rest were te CC, and closer, however, they still kept the punch consistency alive. The opener was dope, nice personal, nice wordplay, best bar of the battle. I like the backwards play also, you spun it pretty well and put it to good use. Nice flow and multi's. I'd say only critique was just that I felt those couple lines weren't up to the instensity of the rest of your verse. Solid verse Punk. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era /
Posted on: 2013-09-29 10:32:05

both were a lil inconsistent, but one had one bar that edged it for em, the opener, which was sick, so votes in,, keep textin my g's Voted: Thaa MaCc Era /
Posted on: 2013-09-29 18:06:41