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Posted on: 2013-09-26 03:08:16

fv Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-26 03:58:06

Good ish Macc Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-26 03:58:39

fa sho bro. GL Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-26 04:00:14

Respect to Both Battlers!!! once verse had alot of okay-ish punches. Felt the set-ups and the wording could have been different to make them hit harder. Certain concepts were played. Not alot of use of vocabulary or creativeness. The multi's probably was the hardest thing in this verse. The other verse opener was creative and nice but the set-up could have been harder. Certain wordplay and syallable count was off at times but pretty straightforward bars. Did't really see alot of bars flips but his closer was different and unique as well. Hard choice and I read Twice both had a nice read btw...(no swaying)!!! Fair's in one edged High to Mid Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-26 11:52:41

Two votes???? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-26 14:51:40

yea Thats WhaCc. Drop it in the FVC Thread... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-26 14:52:27

Consistency is what edged this battle here. One outpunched his opponent while the other had smoother multis and tbh if he would stuck w/ his first punch style (it was nice and creative) and continued like that he would of won this battle. Overall my winner spoke to me more. Fairs in Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-26 15:52:43

MaCc Duh GOD: On the plus side as far as the way your verse is written.. No Broken multi's', the flow was good, I have no issues threre. On the downside, I thought your verse was very very light with punches, it lacked the original/creative aspect and the smooth set ups to go with it. The concepts and punches you delivered were very generic.. And I mean realllly generic, so definitely work on being a bit more original, and thinking up some better concepts to attack your opponent with.. MENTALFLOSS: Nothing heavyweight was in your verse, but you were consistent and more direct than your opponent (that is the flaw for the ones that drop the open battles, unfortunately). Some nice nameplay, I liked the illmaculate concept, the opening concept was nice also, but it lacked the wording and took a bar and a half to finish the punch, Closer was a bit on the weaker end but still a punch, nonetheless. Overall the loser just came way too generic for me, as the other was more direct and had a couple better punches than his opponent. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-26 18:20:22

Not bad to both..felt one of you dropped decent flow but concepts were a tad basic.other flow wasnt as good but concepts were hitting a bit harder imo.fairs in Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-27 03:55:49

It was aight it went this way to me.... out Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-27 07:10:43

nice multies against nice punches. fv. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-27 12:29:24

not bad on either side here. one had a clean flow through out and whilst he had a high frequency of punches, they were lacking in power and originality. the loser had wording issues at times but had more creativity and relevant punches. close call but im leaning this way. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-27 13:22:32

kill vote Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-28 01:42:44

Really close battle, I'm going to go bar for bar and rate this so you can see where I'm coming from. Macc: He's a Pussy But He Aint 'FuCcin Wit MaCc! This MANS A DYKE!' He's 'BLAND & HYPE' until that 'Clip And That BLAM UNITE!' I Bet His 'Ma-Riot' When Da 'CANNON LIGHT-SCANS his LIFE!!' If He Tries 'Flippin-My-Words Like VANNAH WHITE? - Not too bad, the build-up for vannah white was irrelevant, still a nice concept there. The mariah wordplay was kind of forced, but still got the idea and was a nice build-up to the cannon scheme. Overall: 7 Mental: Look pervert!... my fists leave ya EATING DA PAVEMENT, still on that gay stuff? dude you NEEDING TA CHANGE SHIT... cause u can catch Macc up in a queer leaving "kid stuck in the rear" like mini van SEATING ARRANGEMENTS!!! Not to bad either, decent build-up to the overall punch, a little bit of filler in there, but nice concept, nice. Give this a 7 also. Macc: I'll Have this 'Kid-In-A-Bag' Like A Condom! 'Whatever BRAND YOU LIKE!!' I Called Him A 'Dyke-Earlier' But i Lied! He Dosent Even 'HAVE A STRAP!' But Mine So Heavy? I Gotta 'Swing It! Look Like Im Doing the CABBAGE PATCH!! - Cabbage patch dance reference is kind of irrelevant, I'm not sure how many people actually know it. I just youtubed it, and it IS relevant to your set-up though, not too bad. Giving this a 6.5 Mental: wow! claiming he STILL PACK DA FIF, and you call that REAL RAPPIN SHIT?... cuz someone should told you, now even your whole crew, read mine like damn Floss! That's ILLMACULATE/ILL MACC YOU LIT!!!.. I actually like this bar, good gun-play se-up. Ill mac you lit/Immaculate is a TAD forced (ON PAPER) but saying it out-loud it doesn't sound that forced. Nice bar here, giving this a 7.5 Macc: Boy, Im the Man Thats Gonna 'HEAT THE ROOM!' he'll 'MEET the REAPER SOON' and i'll 'Return For his COMPLETE PLATOON!' Cuz Homie 'Ya Bars Stink' Like a 'CHEAP PERFUME!!'#EW - Not bad, the whole ''bar'' references are played, but the build-up to it was pretty nice, solid execution w/ the whole set-up. Giving this a 7.5 also Mental: Macc always speaking on "squeezing heat" I got SUSPICIONS MAN, A LIGHTER, so if ya swear URS VICIOUS, DAMN A LIAR... u live that "thug life?" u dumb as shit n when it comes to dick? he's got AMBITIONS AS A RIDER!!! It was a good concept, you couldn't taken the battle with this, but the wording is so off. ''Suspicious man, a lighter'' doesn't sound natural. Either does ''Damn vicious, ur a liar'' This is what determined my winner. Giving this bar a 5. SCORE: 21-19.5 Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Cole Slaw
Posted on: 2013-09-28 13:59:52

Appreciate all the votes and expos!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-28 18:18:18