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Length: 8 Lines

Biter McBiterson (67%) WINNER

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Reppin: Winston Salem, North Carolina, United States

poseidon11 (33%)

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Reppin: Mesa, Arizona, United States

Biter McBiterson

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*listen* you'll never catch his punk ass in a-FIGHT,he the slow dance romance passionate-TYPE,so step outta bounds i'll make ya ''jet outta town'' like last minute-FLIGHTS...after you lose you wealth and-CREAM,i'll misconstrue and melt ya fucking-DREAMNS,so much you could ''steal from yo own pockets'' and it still wouldn't ''boost'' ya self-ESTEEM...yeah so when you palm the heater you was hoping to-GRIP,i'll catch you while you loading the-FIFTH,open ya FIST,take ya gun rip off ya head and make a todem of-IT...your goons and your GANG, are just buffoons wit some-SLANG,treat yo girl like the ''gun noise'' cuz she soon to be-BANGED..

poseidon11

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check it, bitch I'm locked and LOADED. my cock is SO BIG. ya jaw is OPEN here cums the PUNCH, YOU'RE HOPIN! Get off the blunt, quit SMOKIN get off the RUNTS their FOR KIDS get off the grunts their BOGUS get off the stunts it's HOPELESS aight PUNK now open ya mind open ya eye 4 I open ya spine inject in some DYE wake u up with a pink EYE I'll LEAVE FLY leave no mistake, I know what it takes, I create wakes, I laminate fakes. Tried and tested, some of the best shit, you cried and jested just short of molested (DAMN!) my time's invested so trick don't mess with hiatus for a dime I check tricks.

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Battle started: September 17^th 2013 at 01:07
Challenger joined: September 17^th 2013 at 02:10

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-09-17 02:10:13).

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EtherQ Basic Member	I'm hopping on this nobody take it Comment Only Posted on: 2013-09-17 02:09:34
HIGHpothasis	...one was better. not necessarily good but better in the sense of these two. hiatus, you need to work on ya syllable count bro. thats ur only real flaw at the moment. Fairs are in!! Voted: Biter McBiterson / poseidon11 Posted on: 2013-09-17 02:58:24
Vegeta <VATOZ> Banned	No one was really impressive tbh. One had some decent metas while other had okay-ish flow. Apart from that nothing really was hard. Illusion was better in rhymes while hiatus tried slants,thats good thing but IMO your slants should be perfect slants at least then only we get the feel of rhyme or else if you use "slanty" slants then they sound forced lol. I hope you get what I am saying. As I have already advised this to Illusion I really don't feel to repeat it but still I have to since I don't really see any positive change in your verses. Increase your syllable count bro your flow is good but you should use actual multies i.e. 3-4 syllables and also emphasize them by capping them. It will make ur verse readable, and automatically you will learn using cleaner sets of rhymes. Also practice converting your simple punches into hard hitting ones by using your metaphors and adding an imagery to it. you will automatically learn framing by then. Both of ya need to practice, as practice makes a man perfect. haha. Good battle both of ya.Fairs in . Voted: Biter McBiterson / poseidon11 Posted on: 2013-09-17 07:39:11
Gnob Basic Member	. Voted: Biter McBiterson / poseidon11 Posted on: 2013-09-17 10:26:30
Loonatic	one had simple shit, but it was better than the other who had EXTREMELY simple shit. FV. Voted: Biter McBiterson / poseidon11 Posted on: 2013-09-17 16:27:25
poseidon11 Exclusive Member	guess I should cap the rest of my rhymes: MISTAKE/ IT TAKES, WAKES / FAKES, TRIED / CRIED / TESTED / BEST SHIT /JESTED /ESTED / ESTED /ESS WITH /ECK TRICKS! Comment Only Posted on: 2013-09-17 18:31:46
-ChAoS- <reapers> Basic Member	fv Voted: Biter McBiterson / poseidon11 Posted on: 2013-09-18 09:42:11


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