low 7's to the Loser. I see The Potential inside ya bars but if ur ok with Losing then Continue to Display ya Text Like Dat But If u Wanna win Fam, pattern Yourself, More so behind The Ones U See winning. when u Look at ur bars and Look At the Guys with Flames and who Are on the top 10 of the Month, What Do You See? what are the differences between their verses and urs? work on it fam. this Was Still a Good read. Fairs are In! Voted: allEGOrise / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 19:43:58

Weak battle. I think both should look after their pattern. Allegorise kindly start capping your multies. Your wordplay attempts are enough to show that you got potential bro but now its time to step up. Whyt you had some broken structures fam. Kindly CAP only the multies, i.e, only the syllables which actually rhyme. For e.g. Check this SURROUNDED BY SNITCHES DOWN WITH THE SICKNESS FOUND WITH THE QUICKNESS I am taking your this set. Now see SURROUNDED BY SNITCHES is 6 syllables, while other two are 5 syllables . Now I know that your actual scheme is ROUNDED BY SNITCHES DOWN WITH THE SICKNESS FOUND WITH THE QUICKNESS. But you will find some voters who won''t get it so for that just cap the words which actually rhyme. SurROUNDED BY SNITCHES DOWN WITH THE SICKNESS this way. I hope u get it bro and work on it. I hope even allegorise learns from it that how to CAP the multies. Rather I would suggest you both not to cap the multies initially. But if you wanna cap it cap it correctly. Overall your verse was weak too whyt. Seen much better from you. Alright fairs in. Return the favor by dropping a fair vote on my battle someday. thanks Voted: allEGOrise / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-19 02:45:30

And thats how the cookie crumbles Voted: allEGOrise / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-21 23:21:51