one syllable words never win battles. the loser has to expand his thinkin to win battles. to the winner, be careful with those ending bkus here, u had a few that didnt connect. Fairs in!! Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:14:06

Which ones Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:17:22

lmao..fuck off soal.u just tryna get number 1 this month.take yo bs elsewhere Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:28:38

both were decent, nice to see winner using multis, just make sure you put all the rhyming syllables in caps Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:31:18

but dont get big headed and soal would definetly own you Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:33:24

That's a full exercise scheme get the fuck outta here with that hate vote its nice to see the winner using Multies???? Must be a friend on here I kilt that one Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:42:08

nah we aint exactley friends hahahajus calm your fuckin tits, its a fair vote Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:47:09

no u didn't bitch..u ass Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 15:50:45

Whyt-noiz I liked the dumbbell line but it wasn't enough to take this battle Twisted had the magnum line and that disapeer line was sick Fv Gb Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-16 16:42:31

Magnum line so played out in 2009 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 16:58:44

hate^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 17:00:10

No hate bro I battle competition your good I like ur style only bein real Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 17:09:31

respect^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-16 17:10:21

ehhh. winner was just on a different level Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-17 23:12:35

Right Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-18 11:55:27

Really nice battle as far as concepts are concerned. The way whyt used the concept related to exercise and implemented it in a creative way was really impressive but I think he stretched that concept too long. Nice multies. Twisted nice verse from you too conceptually. Here yes I have to agree to whyt that the magnup pop condom thing is played but other concepts were nice. IMO my winner had better metas and his punches were hitting harder compared to the loser. The loser infact isn't the loser I really liked both verses conceptually. Both were equal in puns . Good battle. Return the favor someday by dropping a fair vote on my battle. thanks Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-19 02:17:37

twisted-pretty basic verse schemewise, alot of single syllable rhyming.. this aint the early 90s, you should start integrating more complexity in syllable count, as far as simile/ metas... theyre pretty basic as well. but... they relate.. and for the mos part work. WHYTE NOIZ- your verse had more complex multis, but 2 syllable aint that much better,and it only got better at the very last bars... as far as setting up your concepts.. you need to do a bit more than putting quotes on words that somewhat connect wit your punches.. i cant even call them punches.. more like half materialized ideas, an example would be .your closer, you start by mentioning all these gym terms, 'dead weight', bench press.., pushup.. but wheres the punch, the main focal point. it kinda fizzled to you sayin he cant measure up to olders? dont you mean elders? you need to think of a concept, and stick wit it .. set it up and follow thru towards a nice simile or metaphor to go wit your concept... you coulda ended the bar wit ' im deadly if you sweat me, so STOP YA SHIT, cause only thing im 'preparin this box ' is so ya BODY FIT/ you seemed to base your entire verse on gym references so that wouldve ended your verse on a high note, and sum up what exersizing will do.. keep ya 'body fit.. anyway.. my winner here just mixed it up a bit more wit jabs and concepts that landed.... fairs in.. Voted: Biter McBiterson / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-09-19 02:43:13