easy win Voted: Infamous Bob / Biter McBiterson
Posted on: 2013-09-15 01:14:17

banned is in ur future lmao^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-15 01:16:03

HIGH LIFE.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-09-15 01:16:24

Insane Wordz send me 4 bars bro u are good Voted: Infamous Bob / Biter McBiterson
Posted on: 2013-09-15 01:34:27

Weak battle. Both of you must use higher syllable counts. 1-2-3 syllable multis are too basic. Infamous had a good flow throughout but failed to actually make impact with the punchlines. Try to use 'Actual Metaphores' i.e., Metaphores w/o "like' or 'as' which make real impact with the punchlines. If you guys have freestyled this one then its ok but if you have thought and written about it by putting your opponent in front of ya then I am really disappointed that I didn't see any nameplays or wordplays. Insane on the other hand used some 'actual metaphores' apart from the similes which made his punches look harder comparatively also his disses were much better than that of Infamous. Infamous bro follow the MMP3 factor if you wanna get better. i.e, use Metaphors+Multies+ Punches+Personals+Pu ns with a proper framing. This will automatically make your bars dope. Well, during my lightworks even I don't use but thats different shit lol. Only flow wont make you better in battles nor it will win you those. Insane you also should go hard with multis and personals you have potential but you need to improve with some 4-5 syllable sets. For e.g. -- THIS FAGGIT BITCH -- IS RAPPING SHIT (these are 4 syllables) Try to read about Slant rhymes and add a lil more complexity to your verses. Your bars should be consistent as well. Try to use Progressive syllables or equal syllable multis throughout your verse for better flow. You got the potential man. Voted: Infamous Bob / Biter McBiterson
Posted on: 2013-09-15 02:16:29

this was weak...both had single syllables and we punches. but the winner Had a Tad More Attack, FAIRS IN!! Voted: Infamous Bob / Biter McBiterson
Posted on: 2013-09-16 00:29:52