Closeeeee. Wording issues with both AGAIN. Seriously you guys shoulda had this sorted by now. Conceptually both were a lil hit n miss. book the scarecrow punch was tasty, build too long winded but the punch was nice. Diss also the opener was your best imo, but like book 4 lines for one punch is a bit much. Also i'll point out that while you used expos, so of your references were too vague to be effective. You needing to use an expo tells me this is so. you know what kinda pisses me off tho? You two clearly could (and SHOULD) be the best two dudes on this site, but you still fucking with the same flaws over and over again. anyways classick/ Posted on: 2013-08-29 19:32:22

Expos: Soul For Rocks/Sulfur Rocks - Diss Eat Full Meal/Deceitful Mills - B.B. King is a famous jazz player. #FuckYoFam Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-26 21:22:10

Oh and Poe's Famous Killer is the murderer from Edgar Allan Poe's Tell-Tale Heart which is about a man who murders an old man because he can't stand the old man's blind eye. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-26 21:24:25

[Expo] : (1) - Truman Show starred Jim Carrie he lived his Life on a Movie set thinking it was Real .. (2) Martin Payne ... (3) Busta Rhymes use to Have dreads before his hair cut (4) Radiation/Radio Active Chemicals = Gamma Rays + Gamma as in Fraternity (5) Exercise = Working out & Relieving Spirits ... Poltergeist Is a Home Haunted By Spirits ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-29 17:11:09

I was actually highly disappointed In one. My winner got the W with good solid connecting punches. The sith vote Voted: Black Book / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-08-30 04:01:21

expected more from one here, thought wording played a big role in this battle, the winner had the smoother read, more orginial punches & on point multis. the fair is in. Voted: Black Book / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-08-30 07:48:59

This was a dope battle guys. Read it twice to make sure I didn't miss anything. This was really close here tbh but Im leaning tjus way...I felt my winner had the more creative concepts as well as a smoother read. While his opponent had a higher punch. Some wording issues but nonetheless this was a nice battle. Fairs in and generous rates for the hotlist Voted: Black Book / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-08-30 15:30:54

Ones wording was a big issue here..very runon for the better part of the verse. Which hurt what would otherwise have been good punches.. u have to break long lines by adding the multi in between.because after so many words the reader will start to expect one because of timing... otherwise it loses flow and starts looking more like paragraphs with end rhymes. Other a bit better structure wise concepts were about on par maybe even slightly weaker. But as a whole constructed better ...fairs in Voted: Black Book / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-08-31 15:46:50