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Posted on: 2013-08-24 21:38:47

fv Voted: Jewry Kane / MJH
Posted on: 2013-08-26 20:21:33

One had better bars , Hope the other Improves and Adds some more Creative'ness to his Drop . Voted: Jewry Kane / MJH
Posted on: 2013-08-26 22:54:40

Aiiight this comes down to concept n punches over straight dissing... Prospect your first bar flowed smoothly if I ignore that "DISS-OCK" bit, not sure what that means tbh but the flow is all I'm feeling as the punch didn't quite hit as hard. Next bar had a great punch and I can feel the "oooooh shiiii" factor, the set up and rhyme was nice, closer was aiiight kinda jabbish IMO but was creative and personal to his character......... Cena, u came straight forward and u said it as it is. U got flow in ur verse but watch out for them Broken multies, some of ur syllable didn't match up in this one. Also work on vocab and bigger combinations to enhance in ur flow. the biggest issue with ur verse is that u need to throw in creative concept with smart punchlines. At the moment they are disses, next step is to think of good concepts then execute them......... Overall one was more complex in terms of flow and the actual bars, the other got potential to elevate further. Fair vote no hate.  Voted: Jewry Kane / MJH
Posted on: 2013-08-27 01:59:16