**EXPO** BINDI=the red dot indians have between their eyes.. MOLLY=MDMA and the last line i used words starting in his name,self explanotory.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-23 13:52:08

good battle between the cruiser weights, pretty even in terms of level here, but one took some advice and tried out some jokes, jokes makes concept, anyway imma give both y'all some tips on ur potential Multi rhyme.... Amm, u got flow no doubt, just enhance it with some more complex rhyme with multi, for example ur first two lines...I would use his name as the first opportunity as the Multi since u choice to mention him.. Something like "STUEY DA KID, blah blah blah NOOBY DA BITCH, blah blah blah, WHO IS A PRICK... Blah blah blah means just fill in the gaps that makes sense. but u see how it's a 4 syllable rhyme? Make sure u cap ur rhymes...... Stuey, I see u already trying this, even though they are very simple 2 syllable rhymes, BINDI, WINDY, CINDY. also first bar was a personal attack on ur opponent giving the sting, which earn some points, kinda fell back a bit from there with single rhyme. try bigger multies for example in one of ur attempts, "JOKE IN PLENTY, then u said HOAX so DON'T TEMP ME, this is a broken Multi as one has 4 syllables while the other has 5, I say lose the word "so" n put a comma after hoax so it still makes sense... HOAX, DON'T TEMP ME now it's 4 syllables, I know the word "IN" and "DON'T" doesn't rhyme but because it's sits I between the first and last rhyme of ur Multi, it still echos as a whole, just make sure that the first and last syllable rhymes.. Meaning the "JOKE rhyming with HOAX as they are the first syllable/word, and PLENTY rhyming with TEMP ME as they r the last syllable/words. If the first n last don't rhyme then it's shit and won't work. Ofcourse if u can get all 4 syllables to rhyme then it's a perfect Multi. Hope y'all both understand. overall one edged this with a more direct hit to the opponent with more creative approach but both have room to elevate further. Fair vote. Voted: Amm / Stuey Da Kid
Posted on: 2013-08-23 18:41:52

ez vote. one came on top. keep elevatin... Voted: Amm / Stuey Da Kid
Posted on: 2013-08-24 01:08:34

FV. Have a blessed life. God bless you and your families. =) Voted: Amm / Stuey Da Kid
Posted on: 2013-08-24 09:37:10

thankx man...u too be blessed Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-24 09:38:39

sent report to ILLoKWENT(FVC Mod). He should reply back determining wither or not Stuey Da Kid's 8 was racist. Idk wither or not it was racist. I voted to the best of my ability. Voted: Amm / Stuey Da Kid
Posted on: 2013-08-24 09:54:21

Ive determined that mentioning turbin as well as red dot did not constitute racism or used in a hateful way.. it constitutes a stereotype which is not against the rules of the site.. and wasnt in bad taste.all other sway or argumentive comments dont need to be here and has been deleted.. thats my ruling. Lets keep it clean guys. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-24 15:51:09