ACissh or what? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-20 01:07:43

AC GanG Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-20 01:35:33

Aiiight John, ur first bar was kinda awkward n took longer than it should to reach the punch, some interesting wordplay though. Next bar sounded simple with the flow, and I didn't really feel the rhyme, the concept could've been taken further. Last bar has the nicest concept in ur verse but again the set up could do some more work,  ur Multi needs some polishing IMO......IIL, the structure and flow in ur opening bar was nice but I don't really feel the punch in the concept, next bar showed some complexity and use of wordplay, in the "address" the punch was aiiight nothing hard hitting to sting the opponent, last bar ended it well showing the complexity in multiple use of wordplay n the set up carries through the punch joke with a decent flow also quite funny, The highlight of the verse.......overall, both showed complexity in flow, structure and multies, felt that one slightly edge in terms of complexity, rhyme and concept though. Both had pros and cons in this one... Fair vote. Respect to both.  Voted: John Dos / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-08-20 03:43:00

Live format id get tens all day y'all voters are stuck on lame internet shit smh Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-20 04:29:08

Jon you obviously just getting that rust off im guessing !!! But looking at ya verse its obviously got it just not executing in this verse itll come the more you battle for sure !!! Illokwent ya verse had dat flow down that swag and build ups where cool liked some of those puns .... My winner gets this by out punching his opponent !!!! FVC .:X:. Voted: John Dos / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-08-20 05:43:56

close battle here. mostly because 1 started off dope but then kept losing steam every bar he spat after that, so consistency was def a major factor. while his opponent kept delivirin decent punches at a constant pace & his setups were all around better structured which caused my decision. good battle y'all, fair's in. Voted: John Dos / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2013-08-20 13:27:34

i hope you all die a slow gruesome death for giving my verse less than a 7 smfh ya'll are all clowns anyways Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-22 04:07:09