BSI Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 01:33:29

quick key. good battle homie Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 01:43:15

Good battle my dude Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 01:50:20

Good drop blickah Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 03:35:19

nothin overly hard on either side, both were touchin on some ok concepts but needed to spend more time to bring out the best in them. my winner came out swingin more with the slightly harder and more frequent jabs Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-19 05:12:41

fv... better flow, more direct punches. Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-19 13:52:46

My winner had the flow and better structure despite some played concepts. My loser had some decent concepts and punches but the flow was bad throwing off the verse. Multies could use some work also. Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-19 14:07:28

GB FV Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-19 15:50:30

Dope Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-19 20:01:04

both, need to work on better setups, BICKAH =ya first bar, sets up wit 'violence vs. less rap, then you talkin about how ya opponent is like cigarettes... you need to keep the idea consistent and relate your setup wit your end punch... so i wouldve started wit, when i show ya the 'cans, sir' this gon turn to a DEATH MATCH, between violence vs. LESS RAPS, 'smoke you' from new york, you's a newport, more 'butt' then a FRESH PACK... ,,,,, see how i setup the cigarette concept with stuff that relates to the subject, then i end it wit something that makes more sense while dissin the dude, a 'butt' is whats left of a 'smoked cigarette', so he aint a 'fresh pack..' Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-20 01:34:12

dopeman- im seeing consistent complexity in your multis, which is a plus, also matched , you need to now focus on better relavent buildups, cause you got the basic idea of concepts, ex... 'ballin wit sluts'=no game wit the hoes.. they just need a lil more strenght imo.. and if your gonna end your idea wit a diss about him having no game wit ladies, you should start your setup heading in that direction.. it makes for a much stronger 2 bars... anyway, what it came down to was consistency in schemes because both were more miss than hit in the punch department... although both just needs a lil push to head in the right direction and can be future heavyweights, with the right mentoring.. fairs in. Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-20 01:46:09

Higher punch count is what took this battle. The other was smoother w/ the steez but his punches didn't land as hard. Close fairs in Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-21 10:46:50

Pretty Close Battle Punches and such were even so it came down to whose flow i liked better Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-21 12:26:55

fv punches took this one for me vb Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-21 16:53:57

close battle Voted: BLickaH / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2013-08-22 02:32:29