expo:: louisiana shooters are alcoholic drinks that you set on fire hence "set the bars on fire" line;; jefferey star is a celebrity with a sex change from male to female;; oscar the grouch lives in a trash can;; doplar radars track storms::: goodluck and pm with any questions. Fair Votes Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 20:28:27

and "violent scrips"(Violent Scriptures) is a captain in The Chloroformers Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 20:29:36

adrian and cassius are little nickys two brothers who follow him around the whole movie...everything else should be self explanatory...pet detective talks out his ass w his hands in the movie...if u never seen it Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 20:43:08

:D Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 20:48:16

oh yea and nicholas is the crew leader of that baker street click Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 20:48:25

It's in the Form! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-11 21:32:50

Indonesia, first barflowed smoothly, like to see it with a bit more flip in there, next bar was funny gave me a chuckle and relevancy was nice, however just a small broken multi, again it's a good diss not quite a punch but it's getting there. next bar, when u do inner rhymes i suggest u write them like this da-kingpin's-tough & wing-man-nuts, This was how people advise me to write them. this way viewers don't get confused with ur main rhyme, good flow here, closer again was funny, but didn't hit as hard as it should've, i don't really feel the flow here with the rhyme tbh.......King Pin, honestly i'm having trouble with ur verse and had to read it twice, first bar was clear with direct hit. next bar had some force multi in there imo, e.g. DORKS GAYS FOR THE COCK... anyway though the set up and delivery was good it didn't made it's full potential, last bar kinda almost in the same situation... i like to see more clean delivery with smooth flow next time.... overall both emcee didn't bring their A game in this one. one was funny vs technical...hard decision but i see it like this, if this was a joke over bars battle then the result would've been different so i vote accordingly.. fair vote, like to see another round. high and low Voted: Indonesia / Da KingPin
Posted on: 2013-08-11 23:19:10

Ok ok ok .... Indo ... You need to work on structure due to your lack of hard puns here and your delivery it's hard to determine where your bar ends as you seem to continue into the next bar then the multi changes this doesn't help you out at all started off ight but then fell off to be honest and se of those Multies was kinda forced and by forced I mean you was plucking words out of no where just to keep it rhyming ... Some nice concepts tho liked the doplar radar concept just could of been executed a lot better ... Kingpin ... Ight I see you bro solid verses here good concepts nice puns nothing wow but solid all round verses that little Nicky reference made me laugh ... Dope shizzle peeps ... .:FVC:. .:X:. Voted: Indonesia / Da KingPin
Posted on: 2013-08-12 06:42:14