Expo: 1st bar - Flip on "windows", 2nd bar - flip on "break out", clearasil = pimple cream, clear a cell = escape from prison, 3rd bar - Flip on "period" = punctuation (another name for 'full stops', apply at the end of a sentence), flip on "sentence" = condemn to a punishment, or writing sentence, 4th bar Self explanatory.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-05 02:49:18

Where's the rhymes? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-05 03:57:57

You guys use a lot of metas but the flow is ridiculous start matching up the words and nic don't be spitting about dicks i don't wanna knos nothing about that. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-05 04:00:16

^^^ what a fucking idiot. 4 score? The punches in both verses are above ur head if ur standing on Mt Everest kid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-05 04:06:24

yeah alright, I blocked him already Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-05 07:26:33

Ok let me give it y Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 07:39:54

Ok let me give it you like this Nicholas that first bar wordplay doesn't work ma dude if ya using a wordplay like that the pun needs to work both ways ya dig so the sent him heaters needs to go with the dick measurements part and it doesn't .... So that's a fail for me famo nice idea just not executed .... The rest of ya verse was ight nothing like WOW !!! But solid ish bars ... Snoopy again you didn something similar with your clear a cell line wordplay is fine but the Lu. Doesn't go both ways on the end it only works worth the one type of wordplay .... I'm not saying these aren't effective e it's just a case of why make the reference to the wordplay if its got fuck all to do with the resulting punch snoops works a lot better with the "break out" being tossed in before the end multi but for it to be 100% effective the wordplay should work both ways with the ending mult .... Looking further into ya verses one was just smoother and delivered a better pun for me this is a very close battle however .... Props to both try not to take my critique to harsh I'm just being real with both of you and truth be told I think you both know this .... Nice concepts just not being executed to their full potentials ..... Anyways I'm leaning this way .... FVC .:X:. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 07:50:05

Ight this is how i see this battle, both forced a lot of wp, however my loser came out the gates swinging, i liked the idea of ya first punch tbh, but after that the rest of ya verse was filled w played and even more forced shit, my winner came out the gates swingin his first bar was a clever and comical diss, he did force wp too but to me it wasnt as forced as his opponents, the kings droppin the fair, gb keep bangin fellas Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 08:20:07

iiiiiiiiiight, Winner had dope wordplay. i fuks w/ it. tha concepts carried from one bar to next nicely. alil bland in some areas (Which hurt tha rating) but overall a solid 8. Simple yet effective, Loser had some shit to offer.. not really as dope as tha puns suggest due to freshness issues. but ha overall skill is showing advancement. Overall i enoyed tha read, but conceptually and thought process is alil behind. G'spar... THV Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 12:58:14

Pretty close but I got my vote gb Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 16:20:04

smooth Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-05 17:41:34

not a bar spar here. both put out some word play, which in places was a bit n miss on both sides but as a whole my winner was stronger in this aspect. the loser was touchin on some good concepts but i think the wording let it down a bit, u need a spend a bit more time and get a more creative with your concepts. both were quite straight to the point with the punches but i think 1 edged this in every category. Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 08:05:25

Nicholas with that fire!!!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-06 16:21:09

nice wordplay and concepts Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 20:01:49

Fair VVB Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-06 23:34:25

FV VB. No Expos Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-07 14:51:49

This was actually a pretty dope battle here. My winner though took this w/ a cleaner steez in terms of punches and wordplay and a smoother verse....Possibly the best I've seen from him (so far). The other looked like he stepped it up a level here but I wasn't really feeling the opener and also a couple of played lines. Still some solid jabs thrown but not enough to take home the W. Fairs in Regs to high Voted: Snoopy316 /
Posted on: 2013-08-07 19:34:21

Good battle homie, Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-08 15:37:41