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Posted on: 2013-08-01 15:18:43

FV Voted: poseidon11 / Mot1ve
Posted on: 2013-08-01 15:42:44

One sided..but to the lacking opponent I offer that they look in the HOF.. and study some of the dopiest material presented to LB. write no less then 1 battle every day. preferably 2-3 for awhile until its completely natural. as for the vic.. seems you may have done some lightwork but who knows... gb nothing blew me away as for concepts they were pretty dry.. amused by ones atmosphere.. all in all everything was on the lower side of decent. Voted: poseidon11 / Mot1ve
Posted on: 2013-08-01 21:24:20

oh shit was close to be honest.... ok hiatus, one thing, only CAP what rhymes, u got some interesting concept in there, I can see potential in elevation in that area, all u need to do now is to work on ur multi rhyme, set up a good structure and be more clear in ur concepts... highlight line is the battery line though need some work to strengthen it, the closer got potential but didn't quite get there........ Motive, you had some good metaphors in ur verse, and like ur opponent u too need to uppen ur multi rhyme to make ur verse more complex... ur last bar was pretty good concept wise but need to execute it more... overall, this was too close as both are about the same level... winner on just a tad in flips and jokes, also flow is a tad clearer. fair vote. no hate. hit my inbox if u guys need advice on multies and set ups. Voted: poseidon11 / Mot1ve
Posted on: 2013-08-01 21:38:06