vs Snoopy316 Expo: Snoop Dogg is also known as Snoop Lion, everything else s/e Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-01 02:33:35

+ snoop dogg dropped a song called "drop it like its hot" a while ago Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-01 02:35:10

good shit, aiiight, u should've told me this was coming so I can get ready so it won't be slept on bruh, i'mma get at it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-01 02:39:20

Quick expo: word flip; spit, hole in one, fuck up, Object....Good battle JS Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-01 04:27:59

Well one guy had me reading through and laughing the whole time. While the other guy had me laughing in some parts. One felt more forced too.. While my winner seemed to flow a little better. Fair is in. Vb Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-01 04:37:09

Winner had me laughing more imo, GB. Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-01 11:23:54

i didnt think either verse was too great to be honest. prospect had some nice ideas but failed to pull them off properly due to bad wording and too much filler, u need to get to ur punch quicker otherwise ppl lose interest. snoops verse was funniier, but again had some wording issues and some parts just didnt make sense. both need to work on punch strength as neither of u really came out swinging. im gonna vote this way because this verse felt like it was more in attacking mode than the other, not by much tho Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-02 05:02:06

LMAOOOOOOOO Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-02 13:11:10

Not going to lie was really dissapointed with both here both can do better multies where very basic puns where predictable to a point in terms of name flips and wordplays but based on who had the more attacking verse im leaning one way ... FVC .:X:. Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-02 17:48:00

nice lil battle here.. pros, im enjoying your flow, getting more polished scheme wise, some ok personals, i did enjoy the running AFTER DA GOL..wasnt feeling the closer tho, felt a lil vague, were you tryin to say, snoop's heart has no Gangsta in it? my one concern is your setups could use more relavence.... multis flowed beautifully but lacked in relating with your end punch... ex. would be your last bar, you talk bout ya darts attacking , then you end by talkin bout him imitating snoop dogg, and ya concept was 2 g's in his name' which i would regard as a name play, but it ends on a jabbish note... Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-03 05:57:34

SNOOP-OK , started off weak and noobish with teh 'spit ill/eww, which is pretty forced.. ill and ewww,NOOOO. dont do that shit ever again..lol.. next one, was a nice joke punchline, started off with the golf reference which builds up nicely to the juvenilish 'poop yourself' to hole in one.. next one didnt quite understand how prospect and chess have anything in common.. it was sorta relavent with 'moves' but ends in more gay jokes which was a bit basic.. end was aight, nothing great, but once again you had relavence, setting up with hard to get, then finishing off the idea that he wouldnt object.... what this boils down to is who had more balance and consistency, and my winner excelled slightly in one area more so than the other .. fairs in.. Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-03 06:06:41

iiiiiiiight, ma loser here had one too many gay jokes for ma liking. also somma his multies were jus crammed into place...makin tha read real hard to follow. Ma winner had tha best bar in tha battle, somma his other tries were'n up to par but still came off smoother. overall this wasn tha best battle in tha world, but it was funny Voted: Jewry Kane / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-08-03 08:33:36