Expo,: fresh prince/ will smith Break him for every penny like a wife divorcing/ leaving you/ nickel less Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-28 16:14:16

Good battle, it was real though to call, but FVVB Voted: ET the Refugee /
Posted on: 2013-07-28 16:59:27

Ok it's quite clear the winner here ... To my loser you need to make your bars relevant to your punch so you pub at the end say the will smith concept ... Come fresh ... What has knocking over a drum set got to do with will smith ??? Nothing you need to make your build up to the pun relevant to the actually pun so the will smith pun the Multies and rhyming scheme before should have a direct link to will smith .... Hope that makes sense to my winner. Not much to say you been around long enough to know what you are doing solid lil verse ... FVC .:X:. Voted: ET the Refugee /
Posted on: 2013-07-31 06:44:44

TBH... Ma loser had everything needed to win this bout.. readability, flow, and humor.. but he lacked tha delivery...tha swag of it all. ma winner landed hits with more conceptual power and with more agression. that there is tha deciding factor from me. THV. Voted: ET the Refugee /
Posted on: 2013-07-31 08:39:47

Better delivery and harder punches Voted: ET the Refugee /
Posted on: 2013-07-31 14:32:23