Good Bout & Good Luck! .:LG:. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-13 20:50:43

you too man..respect Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-13 20:51:02

Hmmm both seem out of wack a little if you ask me ... Delivery and execution was lacking from both multies where meh and forced ... Wordplays where not great either .... Both need to re-read before sending and see if it really makes sense .... But based on what's here one had the better verse slightly .... FV .:X:. Voted: kru:shul / Mr`WordParlay
Posted on: 2013-07-14 09:46:25

expo: to split something by 'half' is like dividing something by 2, which is a mathematical calculation. 'behind the scenes' footage of a movie describes how the movie itself was 'shot' or 'made' and 'scene' also refers to a crime scene which is usally where a murder has happened. the stalls in restrooms are used only by men who have a penis (sorry for pointing out the obvious). a pussy refers to both a coward and the female organ, but the coward definition has a bigger role in the next couple of phrases where i mention he acts/pretends as if his 'legs are bruised' so he can't move up the stairs to reach the next floor or to simply put it he can't 'elevate' because he can only spit 'basic concepts and rhymes'. the 'core' refers to his heart which will 'stop beating' after i shoot it directly with the tip of a gun sitting in the space between the ribs, hence 'tip squeezes between the bones' which is like flossing your teeth. read the verse again if it still doesn't make sense. thanks for the fair votes! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-14 13:36:30

fv Voted: kru:shul / Mr`WordParlay
Posted on: 2013-07-16 07:33:09

Both need some work on proper setups and keeping it relavent to the punch..my w8nner came wit a bit more humor and felt cleaner as a whole fairs Voted: kru:shul / Mr`WordParlay
Posted on: 2013-07-16 17:56:32