Good Job You two. God bless you and your families. =) Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-06-29 10:10:59

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Posted on: 2013-06-29 13:01:50

There was some good stuff from both guys here. One of them was keeping to real consistent multies, which is always good. Other guy had a few better concepts and play, but still had one guy edging it based on the structure. Fairs always. Send 8 either of you. Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-06-29 17:38:23

Good battle, had to read it twice to decide the winner here. one's got good setup and concept, the structure was consistent too. punches was not hitting too hard but was present in all 4 bars..... The other started out a lil light but kinda killing it towards the end, wordplay was creative also the punches hit alot harder in the end... overall both had similar delivery but different styles, multies was slighty more complex than the other. I feel one took this by a hair line. like to see round two and changing sides. Fair vote. no hate. good battle guys. Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-06-30 04:34:36

Father Molly: Opener was cool, liked the logic in the bible concept... expert boxer line fell shot, moreorless it was just talking about your punches and not dissing your opponent... Closer was misworded, didn't have any punch effect because of that.. A bit of filler in your bar too.. You started off decent and fell short the rest of the way through in your verse... The Art Of War: Opener fell short punchwise.. Didn't like the concept... Prince popped line wasn't worded too well, keep in mind some of the slant rhymes your using are iffy too... "texture" line was okay, didn't have the pow in the punch though... Prose line was tight. Overall battle was kinda weak IMO.. One had a couple better concepts in his verse. Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-06-30 13:24:10

nothing too exciting from either side. both had some wording issues. my winner is only slightly edgin this becuase im leaning towards your punches more and u had the better concepts. both could do with checkin out battles from experienced members to see how to construct their bars better Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-07-02 06:29:16

Close battle but I'm kinda disappointed. My winner wasn't my original winner, some of your concepts were somewhat obscure and very indirect. Some self hype. But you ha a good flow. Last line was decent but could've held more impact if you used a more relevant setup instead of continuous filler. The Loser.... I've definitely seen better from you. Some broken ass multies here... Broken, Ass multies. Lead to inconsistency. Some of your concepts were shotty as well makin them pretty light and more of jabs really. My winner took this with better rhyming because both Guys with concepts were pretty questionable. Fairs in. Pm for tips expos and advice Voted: Father Molly /
Posted on: 2013-07-02 10:04:11