Expo: The first dude who played superman (Christopher Reeve) fell off a horse and became a quadriplegic. The whole jacking mad cream scheme is all related to rules of the road. Anyone thinking 911 bars are played well this is a different twist. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 11:53:53

G'luck Book Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 11:54:18

Expos: Prior/Pryor Act as in Richard Pryor the comedian..Rick Ross and Lil Wayne both lost endorsement deals over lines in songs recently..The Manhattan Project was the code name for the creation of the first nuclear missile..Pair ah normal/Paranormal Activities and We G! Bored/Ouija Board which is a board used for ghosts to communicate with people through..Sonar is sends out a sound that times how long it takes for the sound to bounce back to locate it... #FuckYoFam Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 11:55:23

Bullies! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-14 15:22:20

This was definitely a dope battle.. Both had some nice concepts that i was feeling and strong execution but my choice got this with consistency imo.. His opponent had a possibly the best punch of the battle but had a line that was meant for a cypher which somewhat took a point away and the fact that his opponent was throwing punch after punch aint help much either.. So its that close imo and this battle could possibly go either way.. Overall dope battle.. Generous ratings for the hotlist.. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-14 17:02:38

Both brought fire in their drops, but one edged it for me. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-14 19:25:44

This was extremely close. Black book had a great concept. His punches were nice but only one real personal nameplay. It was sick though. Manhattan had alot of it. He was hitting where it hurt with the punchlines therefore he gets my fair. good battle for both textcees Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-14 21:26:15

Manhattan: Opener was a pretty dope nameplay.. Liked it, flowed well... The whole next bar was dope, it all connected together well.. Twin tower concepts are a bit played, and wasn't really feeling the punch attempt on this one.. But from what it has, it keeps consistancy alive at least... The whole traffic scheme, all had nice connection, flowed well, but again the punch wasn't up to par with the concepts and build up brought.. The closing concept and set up was dope.. Maybe a bit different wording it could have hit a little harder, but nonetheless the line was nice, and a good way to close of your verse. Great drop, I enjoyed it... Black Book: Opener nice wordplay and concept, but as an opening punch I expected a bit more... Depending on how the readers read the battle, the different endorsements multi could seem off from the flow, but overall I liked the concept brought in that bar... the "hot box/marley" line is a dope concept, but it could have been worded a smoother, and you used that multi scheme with only 2 multi's and then changed it right away.. That takes away from the smoothness and readability.. The manhattan project line was dope.. Ghost writers line was crack, concept and all... I do however feel the "pair ah normal activies line was misworded.. "A paranomal activies for most fighters" I noticed many people here write wordplay that doesn't really make sense to the english language when you read it the other way around... Closer was cool, punched and kept consistancy alive, but I have the same comment as the opener, I expected more for a closing punch.. Overall I enjoyed both pieces. I have my vote here. One punches just stuck a bit more with me. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-14 23:48:31

I'm gonna read this in a bit. if anyone cares. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-16 11:34:33

fv Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-16 12:37:06

Keep it moving, Stoopid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-16 15:37:17

I think this calls for a bar for bar .... Lets do this .... Manhattan ... Bar1 ... Nice flow good meta's nice attempt at a personal nothing wow or mind blowing 7/10 ... Bar2 ... Meh kinda stretched out here that little multie interchange at the start showed to me you where kimda lacking in the build up and was clutching a straws punch was meh too heard the concept before 6/10 ... Bar3 ... Liked the punch but to much filler for the build up need to make it shorter so it hits harder and quicker 7/10 ... Bar4 ... Traffic signals comcepts are played this was a fresh twist on it but again to much filler and build up for me for this to connect properly nice pun tho 7/10 ... Bar5 .... Two multie finisher shows you had to much filler and the fact we only really made it to bar 5 nice pun and closer but could of been better for me if it'd had another multie in it with a metaphor 7.5/10 .... Black book .... Bar1 ... Nice little opener here shit was ight 7/10 ... Bar2 ... Nice concept felt it could of been worded better build up was coo too and on point 7/10 ... Bar3 ... Needed another multi in it to make it flow better for the pun two multi broke to far apart lost the flow and the delivery because of it pun was cool just build up was lacking 6/10 .... Bar4 ... Boooommm this was a hard body bar build up was nice flow was on point had it all BAR OF THE BATTLE 8.9/10 ... Bar5 ... Yeh shits connecting now better wordplay was coo the pun could of been better tho i felt still and dope bar 8/10 ... Bar6 ... Nice closer too right here good build up again executed nicely with the punch was feeling this 8/10 ... My winner gets it for harder up ches better build ups and less filler ... Dope battle tho peeps FV .:X:. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-16 18:24:59

Very close battle , the winner had a more consistent verse Fv inn Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-16 22:33:05

fv in Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-16 22:59:35

I thought one was a full point ahead by way of more connecting jabs/punches. both had a haymaker. the losers haymaker was actually all around better, but they were overwhelmed by less filler and less flailing punches. one was also easier to read for me. I did read both twice only though. I hope my vote and perception is appreciated. Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-17 11:40:16

@grizzeat , watch your tone little midwest boy if you're calling me stupid and shit. I'm not the one. Know that! Voted: Manhattan / Black Book
Posted on: 2013-06-17 11:42:52