tired late got 2 sleep forgot to cap didn't cap COLD HELL. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-06 04:00:13

Heath its been about a month since i lasts read one of your battles .... Just reading threw this i can see youve made a slight improvement on your style but still not good enough go look up dono in the forums and watch his tutorial videos ... You need to work on punches and metaphors and also your multies stop rhyming the same words and capping things that domt necessarily rhyme .... Emdub i see you have grasped metaphors and punches with you in the box line ... You need to work on your multies also .... Keep at it tho both yall ... FV .:X:. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / BizzyOne
Posted on: 2013-06-06 10:04:54

i need to learn how to improve on my own, listening to others hasent helped my rymes get better. but it has helped the content and structure. thanks though x. this was off the dome. i said this half assleep and was like damn this is ok i should write this down. so i got out of bed and came here. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-06 18:38:01

i think i need to explain(ill bust nerds through cold window pain) i'm talking about my punches stinging after you read my lets beef on your microsoft windows OS. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-06 18:42:22

im not realy a battle rapper, but ill tear a cypher up! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-06 18:43:28

Enjoyed both.... Heath your metaphores and vocab was pretty decent, no worries about what others might say, of course any improvement should be welcomed though. Emdub seems like you were on your game in this battle but of course, any improvement should still be welcomed. fv Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / BizzyOne
Posted on: 2013-06-09 21:42:05

thanks for the votes Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-10 01:18:21

One hit harder here. Voted: iceCREAMcheezcake / BizzyOne
Posted on: 2013-06-10 02:14:08