I'mma own ya son, your SOUL IS ON LOAN I pop the SCOPE IN THE ZONE with 'No Sweat At All' but you wouldn't be 'Pro Fresh On All' wearing JORDAN'S COLOGNE! psh, I don't see you 'Popping The Gun' or HOLDING THE CHROME so I'mma but a 'Dagger In This Block Head' no SWORD IN THE STONE! Your too Bitch thats why you DON'T PULL ANY HOES skinny pants? you know you GROW OUT OF CLOTHES? i just whipped you with SOME CLOWNING BLOWS plus, your verse looks like you 'Jacked Off In Your Box' no SKULL & THE BONES ! ez Go2Zzzz Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-06-02 02:16:26

Yeah, Execute's Flow is definitely more advanced. Cool Battle though! Voted: ChainsNThangs / Execute
Posted on: 2013-06-02 02:27:38

PRO - Opener was very basic, you were rhyming good but it was too simple for me, more complex concepts and bigger Multis needs to be moulded into your drop. The punch was weak and the lack of setups really hurt you. Only good thing i saw here was the simple flow of words and simple structure other then that the rest was not very effective. You also need to be careful when switching to then next rhyme scheme. It seemed to be the same case for the rest of your drop, you have some good ideas there but think more outside the box, add wordplay, get technical w/setups etc. So Overall: Multis were very mediocre, Structure was decent, Vocab was decent, Punches were very weak, Concepts were there but better setups would help, Wordplay can be added easily, some basics shown but some also missing but it can easily be improved. [No Stand Out Line]. EXE - Not a bad opener, the rhyming is questionable but the Multis were ok, came off with a nice jab but the concept though is very dull and is played out but again i must give props for execution. 2nd bar was again nice but be careful with the wording fam, you seem to shortcut your delivery w/words which almost sometimes you dont make sense but other then that you execute very well just polish up your wording. Had a good metaphor there with anoth decent jab. Closer showed your consistency but again the same problem with wording. Overall: Not a bad drop, your easily improving in all area just work on the wording, concepts and complexity IMO. [Stand Out Line: 5]. Loser could learn a few things from My Winner but also check out guys like UA, Jason, GRizz, Phenom, XCal & RULE. My winner just took it in all areas. Low to Low. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: ChainsNThangs / Execute
Posted on: 2013-06-02 08:48:50

tbh, this was a easy choice. My winner is in a higher level and it showed here w/ his multies and OK punches. While his opponent was lacking structure in each category. Fair's in. Voted: ChainsNThangs / Execute
Posted on: 2013-06-02 10:10:26

this was elementary rhyming verses basic rap..in all honesty both yinz need to peep some vets on the site and just start working on devolping a technique..32s are a GREAT way to do that...GONZO VOTE Voted: ChainsNThangs / Execute
Posted on: 2013-06-04 01:13:18