SEND ME 8!!! Expositions: 1-"Dope" has another meaning as a noun which is "Idiot". 2-He'll be three in one because he/she is an asshole, he/she has an asshole(Of course), and my disses will fuck him/her so hard he'll have another asshole. 3-Sucked his/her father's dick in stead of the mother's breasts. 4-"Sickening" can mean "Making someone disgusted(Sick)" and can also mean "Loathsome(Bad)". 5-"Guys" has a verbal term which means "Making fun of". Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-31 21:57:30

Fuck! I wanted to post this in June! It's 1st June in Egypt already. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-31 22:00:56

ok this was an even battle but one got the concept more then the other Voted: Soly / soonerkid
Posted on: 2013-06-01 00:56:49

SOLY - Opening bar i wasn't feeling the punch it was very basic, the Multis were on point in terms of syllables but only having 2 syllables is too easy, i suggest keeping it at least at 3-5 but thats my opinion. Your rhyming was very questionable here eg DAMN DOOR & ASS HOLE don't rhyme. The concepts were very dull and the punches were weak, try considering more complex and creative concepts. Overall you had clean Multis but extend the syllable count, Punches could be much more creative w/the help of some bigger concepts, structure was good, creativity was dull, wordplay can be added. Basics are down but some areas need some work.[No Stand Out Line] SOONER - Ok your structure on this one was good but other then that you had a similar drop to Soly, work on your Multis , a heavy lack of punches due to one major thing fam and that is always keep your bars aimed at your opponent. I felt this was more a cypher then battle lines. Overall work on your multis, keep the punches coming at ALL TIMES, go deeper w/your concepts/ideas basically think out the box but your structure was good but thats about it.[No Stand Out Line]. Low to Low. A very dull battle, very close but my winner edged it w/punches. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: Soly / soonerkid
Posted on: 2013-06-01 01:29:35

gb, soly made more sense imo. vb Voted: Soly / soonerkid
Posted on: 2013-06-01 02:01:17