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KING WAYNE (67%) WINNER
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Reppin: Detroit, Michigan, United States
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Reppin: Los Angeles, California, United States



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Battle started: May 28th 2013 at 01:27
Challenger joined: May 28th 2013 at 03:25


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-05-28 03:25:08).

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Denton

Meant to say Recieving his testament -.- Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-28 03:28:30 Private Message Denton

X-Calibur
<APOC>
The Ambassador

Interesting battle both on a level par both show good potential let me give you guys a break down .... King wayne ... Bar1 ... You got the multies down in terms fo rhyming the words and matching the sylabels in terms of the punch it was weak but you have the build up and the idea behind how to structure the bar to do damage just ya concept was weak 5/10 ... Bar2 ... Sylables where off here DESIGNED THE BIBLE is 5 and the others where 4's again no real punch here just a weak jab 5/10 ... Bar3 ... Little jab bar again you can see you have the idea of how to set int up just needs polishing 5/10 ... Bar4 ... The beleiev in ghost ??? I know its folowing the flow but it has no relelvance to your fourth bar hence this is filler and unecessary .. Multies in this where a mix and match between 4 sylabels and 5 sylabels and thencloser wasnt a punch 5/10 ... Overall 5/10 ... Xplicit ... Bar1 ... Ok multies where offf here fam your firstvwords dont all rhyme so you have EXAMINE , DA FEAR IN & BE JAMMING ... These dont rhyme hence your multis are of you rhymed the last part of the multi but that doesnt make it a multi you might aswell of just capped NINE RHYME & LINE punch concept was there but not very well executed 4/10 ... Bar2 ... Better the multies actually rhyme in this bar probably not the best worded multies and could be cleaner but still ight the punch was meh but this bar was an improvement on previous bar 5/10 ... Bar3 ... Seen ya typo this matches the sylabels up on ya multies but again your not rhyming all the first words ... Soo SPEAK WITH. BELIEVE IS & RECIEVING seee how they dont rhyme .... With thatbsaid the punch was also meh on this one aswell 4/10 .... You only had three bars in this due to how much filler you have in your bars cut out some of the small talk and focus more on the punches in a 8 line verse you should have at least 4 solid punches .... TOP TIPS TO BOTH ... Continue on your paths you both have a grasp of multies and structure and a rhyme scheme watch out for forced muilties and un matching words that dont rhyme count your sylabels ... Go to work on metaphors and really conecting on your punches ... Things you could add at a later date nameplays and wordplays and personals this will just bump ya shit upto the next level ..... Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 06:41:43 Private Message X-Calibur

SolidGroundz
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great battle, lmao here, i jus voted 4 the one who made me laugh the most Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 09:40:03 Private Message SolidGroundz

Duh Great Whyte
<NewRome>
Live Battler

both had some flow and the multies one i felt had a more intricate style with some wordplay, while the other had little jabs but nothing that hard hitting, gb fairs in Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 11:23:53 Private Message Duh Great Whyte

BzFresh101
Basic Member

askin obama-for-a-meal!! Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 14:02:33 Private Message BzFresh101


this battle is too intresting... Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 15:30:19 Private Message tyrantTT


Both were very good, and have potential, this is a close battle , however one edged it for me after reading both verses twice, No hate Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 18:53:03 Private Message LilDoDirty

HeliO

no H8 Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 19:15:18 Private Message HeliO

X Paces
<HotSoulz>

there is plenty of feedback here. it was close, but one's closing was setup better. LMAO Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 20:49:33 Private Message X Paces

APATHETIC
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No Patients!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-28 21:46:04 Private Message APATHETIC

The Dope Man

good shit from both..one just came on top.. no hate, much respect. vote back fair need votes!! Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-28 23:18:22 Private Message The Dope Man


Alright let me break it down for yall like this. The winner had a higher punch count as well as less forced multis however lacked creativity and no real hard hitting bars. Other had too much filler/multis that didn't work well and punches that were too played to give him the W. You guys both have a lot of potential here so my advice is UP THE CREATIVITY as it will lead to harder hitting punches and make sure your multis always perfectly rhyme or else it will throw off how smooth of a verse you have. Fairs in high to low Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-30 11:52:37 Private Message Manhattan

cvitt
Basic Member

gb Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-30 11:58:47 Private Message cvitt

JR3DDY

gb Voted: KING WAYNE / Denton
Posted on: 2013-05-30 17:52:49 Private Message JR3DDY

 

 
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