Calaboose: a prison - APoc Hard = a pochard which is a type of duck Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-18 16:53:44

APOCALYPSE body bag Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-19 06:30:16

tana: opening line was too smooth, but on to the 'calcium pushed back in his stomach' was crack... Next bar the wording seemed off to me, I read multiple times and it wasn't connecting like it could have... The verity line eas fire, nice flow and build up throughout that. overall closing punch was mehh, but the pochard duck connection was nice, but the wordplay there was definitely a little forced, never heard it pronounced that way and even looked up the pronunciation on several sites and it wasn't even close to the way you used it... X-Calibur: opening line, the punch was just okay, felt the flow kinda chopped at the last multi in the bar... "bird gets touched" line was nice.. "tan in the booth" was a nice concept, though it came down to just simplistic nameplay though.. "crews your beating" punch was cool.. the "fight with a fruit" line was crack, I liked that.. both of the closing bars were cool, nothing stuck out but they kept the consistancy alive. Overall pretty close battle, one definitely got more punches in and was a bit more consistant, the other was more creative and had my favorite line of the battle. tough call, but I'm going with the consistant punches here. Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-19 08:15:17

my winner here came w/ some nice nameplays and executions. wow @ that assault tana/a sultana bar. I feel like he coulda game a lil harder, but w/ the damage he did, that was enough to get him the W. While, his competition also had some good nameplays but could of been executed better. Watch out for those multis syllables too: "Ya CHEST PUMP While Ya HOLDIN' YA LEFT NUT .. Til Ya 'Resemble Fat Chicks Takin Pics' .. POSING FROM THE NECK UP" coulda just ended with POSING FROM NECK UP, which woulda went w/ the flow n fit in with the syllables. Fair's in, good battle no doubt, keep it up ya'll ! Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-19 13:32:28

Ok Tana.... started off with some complex shit and was dope. Multies was on point. Some good wordplay in there. Highlights was the opening and the Mr Felons Cellmate line. I feel you could’ve lay in some more heavy punches at him..........X-Cal, there’s some broken multies in ya verse, punches and wordplay was present. Highlight would be the sultana line name play followed by the punch. Thought it was pretty creative. First 2 bars was fire. The rest was alright........ overall I feel that one was more smooth with flow and easier to read. Though his is a close battle to pick, I have a winner. Vote is in. Fair vote. No hate. Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-19 21:22:55

decent battle here.. my winner connected alot better wit their nameflips and concepts didnt feel as forced wit their relation/flip.. multiwise loser had a slightly better flow. and one or two jabs here and there.. fairs in Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-20 12:28:43

decent spar wait for expo. lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-20 12:38:53

This was a dope battle, both had fiery concept, although one was more fluid with the bars, well connected and had less disjointed multis. Loser came with a forcedm opened and wordplays, it was NOT needed. Good Luck! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-20 12:41:21

Reverse the votes please! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-20 12:41:47

APOCALYPSE Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-20 17:14:38

executes vote was deleted upon his request Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-20 22:29:45

Damn some fire shit right here. Best battle I've read in a while here. Tana- I really liked that whole consecutive vitamin wordplay and all the interwoven punches you had, but I felt no closure with that wordplay. you should've had some final punch to settle it. Damn though, stayed pretty consistent throughout and had some pretty good scheming. No real complaints. Prolly best I've seen from you thus far. X- You had some pretty good concepts here. Your downfall was your failure to develop those concepts. If you had worked a bit more on those nameflips and made them a bit more conceptual you woulda thme but I felt they were sloppily put together with no cohesiveness and they came off as strong jabs at best. If you had worked on more relevant setups shit would've been done. Overall though, my winner showed more consistency and more potency in their concepts. Fair's in. Voted: Shezso Eu / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-05-21 17:33:18