its easier to rebuttal Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 21:20:58

and that cat was yours Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 21:23:43

hahaha nothing personal bruh, just a fun battle. but if u wanna have beef for real. send me a personal 8 line battle and we get it popping. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 21:25:38

nah i don't have any beef....i just noticed you don't post battles, but i like those last punches though Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 21:28:52

oh u want me to send u a battle? I do post opens every now and then. but not all the time. just when I post it stays there for days then someone really good takes it gets glitched Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 21:38:47

oh..well shit happen...send 8 if you wanna battle again... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 22:29:28

WHERES ALL THE VOTES ON THIS BITCH!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-17 17:10:12

One verse didn't really have any punches, fv tho Voted: BizzyOne / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-17 20:47:06

Ight lets take a look at what we got here ... Scalpel ... Forceps ... Im going in ... EMDUB ... Bar1 ... Hmmm where's the punch in this bar expired like Goliath ??? Whats that mean 4/10 ... Bar2 ... Cypher ish rapping under your kitchen fam this is just gibberish that domt make no sense 4/10 ... Bar3 ... You should of ENded this with the clearasel line this was the only real punch in your verse fam and it was weak at best 4/10 .... PROGRESSION : you need to structure your verse bar for bar not as 8 consecutive lines this way you can get 4 punches in your verse 2 line =1 bar end of each bar = punch ... You write ya verse like a cypher which is cool for a cypher not for a battle .... Snoopy ... Bar1 ... Weak punch running tracks comcept been played out the multis where a bit meh too wasnt flowing 5/10 ... Bar2 ... Shoot people digi cam played again and musical and physical dont rhyme so forced multi there but still a bar and a punch 5/10 ... Bar3 ... Concept was fresh multis where wack fam no bullshit they don't work and you know this 4/10 ... Bar4 ... Funny finisher probably ya best bar in ya battle concept is played but still gets chuckles 6/10 .. PROGRESSION : stop forcing ya multis and this will make ya punches hit better and tidy up your battles verses altogether ... FV .:X:. Voted: BizzyOne / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-18 15:13:22

decent battle..emdub u got skills dude, this one seemed almost forced..x calibur gave some good tips..to me reading it , it seemed like u overthought it..some extra words, forced multi's and ur bar structure was off , FIRED , QUIET, HIGHER, PILOT-u should have closed that pattern right there..but u went with the goliath line,after u did that u have to close out on that same pattern and rhyme with expired and goliath, but it transition to another scheme entirely..snoopy PM for expo i doubt u need or want it..i will say i enjoy ur texts because they read fluid..FV Voted: BizzyOne / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-24 00:12:30