This was a mismatch battle. The loser has a lot to learn. Capping things that didn't need capped. Your punches were nonexistent, there were no lines that stood out. In closing your drop was just utterly stupid. Voted: Apollyon / bigjr8629
Posted on: 2013-05-16 16:24:52

Easy vote, one just took it with experience . PHE - No expo needed for i know this is Liitework for ya. BIGJ - Structure your bars better, your rhyming is good but try capping ONLY your rhymes also be more creative with your words and concepts. It seemed like you were going in and out of cypher mode always keep your bars aimed at your opponent fam. Easy area to develop in fam, if you need some good examples check out Phenoms drop to geta good idea or just pm me for tips. Mid to Mid. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: Apollyon / bigjr8629
Posted on: 2013-05-18 00:09:16

Someone needs to practice Voted: Apollyon / bigjr8629
Posted on: 2013-05-18 15:05:18

Im going in ... Scalpel ... Forceps ... Phenomonon ... Bar1 ... Simple effective must say im not a fan of the slanted multis this when ya using the second syllabel of a word to rhyme into a multi 6/10 ... Bar2 .... Yeh liked this concept was coo short sweet nice bar 7/10 ... Bar3 .... Meh filler bar nothing pounding but still good bar 6/10 ... Bar4 .... Damn this was a hot bar concept was coo as fuck connect build up was cool 8/10 ..... Bigjr .... All imma say to you is read phenomonon's verse fam you could learn a lot from multies structure punches metaphors everything you are lacking in all of these departments .... FV .:X:. Voted: Apollyon / bigjr8629
Posted on: 2013-05-18 15:20:08