DROP IN THE ROOM..Or even better than that make noises like tryna POP A BALLOON Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 05:08:38

expo: 'im gonna catch this golden snitch like a fucking quidditch match' = hes the golden snitch so hes the main snitch in his parts. and also the golden snitch in a quidditch game, if you catch it you instantly win. 'ill beat you over the head with your nimbus 2000' = the new broomstick harry potter got in one of the films 'ill dunk your fucking face in the goblet of fire' = refernce to the fourth film the goblet of fire Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-16 05:20:11

Good battle. Both came correct. One edged it with harder work. Also got good reference and complexity. Fair vote no hate. Voted: Profite / Arsine
Posted on: 2013-05-16 05:44:38

bruh trash talker killed it no fake n FV no h8 Voted: Profite / Arsine
Posted on: 2013-05-16 09:19:28

This bout was a landslide. Harry: You understand and can grasp the basic concept of how to use multis but where are the punches at? I didn't see a single one and that really effects the verse. You need to come w/ dope punches in order to really attack your opponent. Smooth multis though and verse at least. Just make sure you use metas,punches and even wordplay to help get hard hitting lines across. Trash: Your multis were very smooth but you lacked creativity in your verse. Had some nice jabs and I was really digging the harry potter references as well. Just need to up the creativity on your punches is all. Also I've been seeing this a lot and I'd like to clear it up....when your inner rhyme doesn't relate to the set up then there is no reason to use 'quotations around it' but instead use a dash-for-it for instance 'holding bricks' & im gonna catch this 'golden snitch' like a fucking QUIDDITCH MATCH!!!/ Should be done like this holdin-bricks & Im gonna catch this 'Golden Snitch' like a fucking QUIDDITCH MATCH!!!/ It just makes your verse look cleaner and doesn't confuse the reader into thinking that both relate to the punch....just some advice so take it or leave it ya dig. So the winner took this battle w/ consistency and harder hitting lines. Fairs in high to high Voted: Profite / Arsine
Posted on: 2013-05-16 16:08:41