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Posted on: 2013-05-08 04:54:49

Sorry real g. Didn't see ur message Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 05:21:25

S#!T this was supposed to go to Apoc, real G hit me up and i'll reply same to snoop, good verse tho Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 05:51:42

Snoopy ranked 1 but didnt really get it - maybe just on a diffrent level to what im used to but solid i enjoyed reading that - enjoyed the flow, enjoyed the lyrics, enjoyed most lines. never hate never discriminate all love! Voted: SolidGroundz / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-08 07:37:13

for dogfather the dumbass, here's an expo: 1st two bars talking about chess. knights walk in an L shape. Stale mate is when ur opponent fail to check mate in a game then it leads to a tie. Jail break referring to iphone jail break, its easy as fuck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 17:35:05

Pretty one sided here. Winner definitely outshines with concepts and scheming, however they weren't really developed and alot of the punches were pretty obscure. I got that First chess reference but you definitely need to make sure that everyone can get the concept. So work on making your punches a bit more potent and less watered down. Loser needs to get off the monosyllabics and some of the lines didn't even rhyme. On top of that, his concepts were nearly nonexistent. Overall my winner just definitely showed a better grasp of concepts and rhymes. Fairs in, keep elevatin . Voted: SolidGroundz / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-09 07:01:50

Solid i aint gunna lie you sounded kinda homo in this with that line i willy want wtf ???? All imma say on that line ... Other than that ya shit wasnt really connecting ya concepts where neither her nor their there was no real conviction in your scheme and you where attempting multis i can see but ended up rhyming single words a third of the way threw is that because you gave in on attempting multis iunno ??? Snoopy dude this shit was pretty whack to be honest .... Only thing that pulled ya threw was ya half assed punch at the end really of point in ya verse no real punches or anything standout ish .... Poor battle ... FV Voted: SolidGroundz / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-09 07:46:21

Imma keep this Short & Simple. SOLID - The rhyming on this was not too good, you need to build a Multi game up, some lines were a bit weird and didn't really connect for me, your punches were somewhat messy and were weak but the biggest flaw was your structure. Work on your rhyming and structure then slowly develop your Multis. You were aggressive at times but then you faded within some lines into a more passive state. Observe Snoopys for a small taste in Multis (His capped words) and Structure. A glimmer of Basics were shown just needs more polishing in all areas. [No Stand Out Line Here] SNOOPY - Another snipe, you were consistent with Multis on this one and the wording was much better then past battles. Some lines were played, concepts can be much more complex but since this a snipe its not a bad drop. My winner overpowered his opponents drop with experience. [Stand Out Lines: Opener N Closer]. Low to Mid. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: SolidGroundz / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-10 20:59:58

Wow nice one Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-11 11:40:05