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Length: 8 Lines

Venomoussss (27%)

Basic Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: The Last Don

Reppin: Manchester, England, United Kingdom

ApocGod (73%) WINNER

Banned

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States

Venomoussss

Apocalypse-Is-Counterfeit-Like-2012!!-Hell..-It-Ain't-Hard-To-Tell-That-X's Your-HOOCHIE-Coz-U-Stay-On-X's-Dick-Like-An-Earl Simmons GROUPIE!-You Goofy-Countin-On'-X's-INTERFERENCE-I'm Vexed-Leave-U-Wit-Shady FEATURES- Like A-D- Dre-APPEARANCE!/JESUS,-He's-WACK-Watch Me Smash-This-CANADIAN FAG-He's An Unidentified Bitch- Like-ALIEN-DRAG!!Grip-The-Body-BAG!-U-Can't Git-This-Heart-Here-BLEEDIN-Coz-The-Common-Cold-The-Only-Time-V-Catch-FEELINS-I-Know-He's-SEETHIN-Like-A-Bitch-On-The-RAG-He-Claim-His-Bitch-G-Coz-Even-Her Chins SAG! +His Mom's So Ghetto She Swapz Nails 4 Food STAMPS,

ApocGod

Ill keep on biting Ur tits until the NIPPLE-FLUID-IS-LEAKIN,U think Ur PUNCHES-ARE-RUFF?Nah Ur VERSES-R-FUCKED,they SIMPLE,-STUPID-N-WEAKEST,Ur verses like 'area 51'..'claim to catch bodies' but not a 'SINGLE-HUMAN-HAS-SEEN-IT'(Over)/You are THA SHIT...get it?U be CHOKING-ON-FECES,but bitch,start BLOWING-MY-PENIS and gimme that 'HEAD'...now Thats what i call a 'STROKE-OF-A-GENIUS'(Head/Genius?),Slam and ''dash U'' like the ones u USED-IN-UR-VERSES,I bet this FOOL-IS-A-VIRGIN,U need imPROVEMENT-N-LEARNING cuz when my glock shoot,itll pull ''raps/wraps of your top'' like Ur reMOVING-A-TURBAN''/.Wait is it a Body bag?*Crowd say*-HellYa

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Battle started: May 6^th 2013 at 15:49
Challenger joined: May 6^th 2013 at 15:58

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-05-06 15:58:14).

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X-Calibur <APOC> The Ambassador	APOCALYPSE Comment Only Posted on: 2013-05-06 16:44:13
Consistent` <nitenite>	good battle..respect to both one had forced punches wich kinda messed up good shit though..the other was smooth all around..no hate vb Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-06 16:54:55
Drilla Basic Member	iight Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:06:19
Atiya	fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:08:13
Piru_Town Basic Member	Fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:28:00
Rounin Exclusive Member	Can't vote, Fellow crew member. Go2Sleep though nigga it's all good :P Comment Only Posted on: 2013-05-06 21:16:12
SolidGroundz <nitenite> Basic Member	fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-07 04:33:41
Nitty Exclusive Member	fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-07 12:32:29
cvitt Basic Member	Both were good but one was a little better Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-07 13:28:33
Rounin Exclusive Member	Damn good battle right here. Aight Lady- I think you really need to try and up your conceptuality a bit here, you were really doin straight disses. Alot of oneliner metaphors here and that's good for filler but not if you plan on doing an 8. You need to incorporate more setups and also fix up your rhyme scheme, it was pretty inconsistent being that it switched from 1to2to3 syllables (and that dash thing really fucked up readability in my opinion) seen better from you. Apoc- some real good shit in here. Reaaal good shit. That area 51 line was tight. You would've done the line more justice if you had made use of more relevant setups through the use of consecutive wordplay or something. Your opener was a bit iffy, but it gave that 3 line shock value but still buildup would've been good. Still a good concept. That 'you're the shit' concept was a bit played and the wording was a bit off as a technicality. The end punch was pretty decent that also had some wording problems but for me that stack of multies sort of compensated for that factor. Ending bar was good too but again you need to make better use of relevant setups AND again I think that your consistency with the multies somewhat offset that. Overall if you worked on making your bars a bit more conceptually cohesive that all the lines were connected, you would be alot more deadly than you already are. Good shit. Keep elevatin guys. (imaginary) Fair's in Comment Only Posted on: 2013-05-07 18:51:10
Real Thoughtz Basic Member	fv boring read Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-07 19:05:31
AKgetca Basic Member	fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-07 20:23:59
Tain <VICIOUS1>	i liked first mc wordplay....good shit to both Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-08 02:55:48
Decimal Basic Member	gonna be 100% truthful...besides Fayz.. im pretty sure people just saw that ApocGod had a blue flame and automatically voted for him without reading both verses completely.. no expos nothing.. just "fv"... fuck that shit. im gonna read both verses and break both down completely and give detailed expos for each verse in a few minutes. people battle to get their name out their or to get better and u cant do either one if noone breaks the verses down in my opionion Comment Only Posted on: 2013-05-08 09:32:45
Ill Ridiculous Exclusive Member	fv Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-08 17:02:54
Xplissit	meh Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-08 23:00:55
Profite <1DR>	Nothing too impressive to see hear... Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 01:23:57
ILLoKWENT <DGAF> Hall Of Famer LBT King Concept Champion	one had a more polished flow scheme wise..punches werent too creative but did the job.. loser has potential just needs to clean up their multi usage and work on stronger wordplay. fairs in Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 02:50:54
n0mercy Basic Member	i got to give it to Lady. That Shady line killed me.. lmao Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 03:41:40
Manhattan <LoD> Grand Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	Easy win here. One had an overall better verse and is on another level. Both need to up the creativity but one was just smoother and had nicer lines. Fairs in Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 11:16:38
Javael Buchanan <36C> Basic Member	fv Really no h8 Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 14:20:17
BizzyOne <LoD> LBA Champion Scheme Champion	wow this was a really good battle...good work guys Voted: Venomoussss / ApocGod Posted on: 2013-05-09 15:30:25
Warren Peece Hall Of Famer	save you from the riders? HAHA right. Comment Only Posted on: 2013-05-09 20:12:05


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