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Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:22:01

Good verse fam lets hope it dont get slept on to much Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-06 17:37:18

X-Calibur's first bar was kinda forced DEAD-LIFT-WACK-SHIT, but delivered ok, Then it kinda picked up from there on, the flow was tight with complex in rhymes. punches got delivered. multies was tight throughout. for me it was the last bar that stood out...... Dissizit verse was much smoother to read and i can feel the flow. multies was alright but some broken multies e.g. SLAYIN SOMEBODY? CHANGE PLANS/ JADENS KARATE CRANE STANCE. Punches was sick especially the VAL VENIS line. This all comes down to concept consistency throughout the whole 16 lines. ones got vary concepts, where the other carried through with consistence concept. close as fuck battle. fair is in. no hate. Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-06 18:59:02

This is Officer Dewey and im arresting X Calibur for murdering his whack ass oppoent,im gonna put him behind the bars hahaha playing...APOCALYPSE Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-06 21:07:51

Damn, pretty tight battle here. However, I still have a clear winner. X- Your biggest problem was setups. You had a decent amount of concepts and they were actually pretty good. However, firstly, you had some forced wordplay in there along with overally faulty executions and it was really just hit and miss at times. Wordplay was one of the bigger problems. But overall, you lacked decent setups cuz I was seeing alot of "the only time you'll see....." frequency of this term and terms like it are a clear indicator of a lack in setups. You pulled some Tyger Woodz shit here. Then just alot of the way you just delivered an executed the concepts was off. Like the diss crim in ate line, I don't see how the 'crim' fit in there unless its short for criminal. The same thing happened in alot of the nameflips you did like dissolve and disillusion, it was either the anchoring concept itself was weak or it wasn't presented properly. Diss-I really have nothing to complain about, a bit of filler in there but nothing major, but most of the lines were solid in the least and were the best I've read in a while actually. Good shit. Any further expos just pm me. Peace. Fairs in. Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-06 21:29:24

LOL in no way was that multi broken @Snoopy....I'll be back to vote later Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-07 14:14:28

close x came harder Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-07 22:19:16

outcome here was clear cut. one was very sloppy with wordplay and set ups. the other, although some punches didnt fly as well as he probably thought they would, was creative and came with some nice concepts. Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-07 23:19:37

Gb my niggas vb Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 01:26:19

first of all diss-a-lose-un is forced, multiz were ok.. the pigeon carrier line is probably your best punch, multiz were a bit shaky.. diss solve is forced as well should be more like "only way *diss solve my scripts* is if he melted my verse, or suh'm like that, the *puzzle* had no relevance to the punch, multiz was a bit shaky as well.. diss-crim-an-eight forced as well, *crim* and *eight* no relevance again, what is crim? multiz off.. diss owning ya is the only name play that isn't forced, that one was right on point, multiz ok.. metal to mouth is weak to your standard bro, thats for up coming textcees, good multiz, diss-turban-ya is forced as well, must win dead fair sound forced to get in the multiz bro, other wise multiz good... overall your poor attempts at name plays made you lose this battle, not gonna break down the next guys verse because for any experience battler they know he won straight up, this wasn't close at all... All but one off his punches wasn't on point otherwise his verse was flawless... vote Dissizit... any problem with my vote just let me know and this goes for anyone Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 08:02:48

uh huh.. Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 09:17:51

this comes down to execution and my winner simply had better use of concepts.. multi usage and relavence in setups.. faairs in Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 12:34:37

@6six6 apreciate ya break down .... Diss-solve isn't forced with my accent nor is diss-turning-ya ill give ya the diss-a-loosen was kinda forced .... And the -diss-crim-an-eight was if you look my 8th line/4th bar crim was short for criminal .... But I guess that went over people's heads maybe should have explained it .... Prish-8 the breakdowns ... And frizz how you FVC and put .... Uh huh ... On your vote that shit lazy as fuck .... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 13:24:26

fv one Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 15:38:44

Wtf how is GRizz FVC look at his vote, fucking bs. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-08 16:14:51

vf Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 17:39:16

Ok, x... I thought u over used the 'diss' wordplay. U used it about 5 times and that was the majority of your punches. Id like to see a bit more originality and variety in your punches. You had some decent concepts which needed a bit of development to get the most out of. The middle of verse had some broken multis but other than that it was pretty on point. Overall id say thus verse was missing punch strength and variety but u showed that u have the concepts in your head, they just need tailoring. Diss - i found ur verse a lot easier to read and the flow was consistent thru out. And ur concepts were fresh, xcal could take a lot from your drop because where you shone in your drop is where he lacked in his. Solid verse. It was a good read overall from 2 talented guys, i think the loser can take a lot from this battle which will up his game and ultimately make him more of a problem, but this time the winner shone in every category Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 18:08:58

nice battle one was strong all round though. Creative on both side but one was inconstant and had some concepts that could have been sooo dope if they were executed properly Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-08 23:18:29

good shit Diss. lol @ the big pun shirt size. that was. and VAL VENIS? lol sick Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 04:10:44

X had cool multies but the set-ups lacked. Overdosed on Diss nameplays which is bad cuz most are played anyway at this stage. Diss had some freshness, funny shit. Val Venis was jokes. One was just on another level here Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 08:27:27

Alright pretty dope battle here guys. My winner took this better with more creative concepts which lead to overall stronger punches. Also some more clever wordplay that worked in both ways. Other came w/ too many name plays and some forced wordplay. The multis were very nice and smooth same w a couple of crack lines but it wasn't enough to take home the W. Winner took this w/ consistency and freshness. Fairs in high to low Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 11:24:28

damn Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 11:38:55

thought both had good moments. some forced areas from both. cramming in multis doesnt always work guys, consistency def took this though. not a hard choice to make here. high to low Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 12:40:47

fv no h8 Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 14:11:21

great battle...nice name flips X Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 15:46:04

Holy shit Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 18:05:41

yea Voted: X-Calibur / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-05-09 18:20:08