let me freestyle this blindfolded, no body take it Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 21:40:36

60 seconds key'd. no back spacing. fuck it Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 21:42:09

mine was a key style 2...gb.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 22:04:21

that's good, bruh, that's how this site should work Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 22:10:46

after all it is a freestyle battle it says Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 22:11:55

taking one's word for it on the keystyle, it was slightly better composed. fv, no h8 Voted: REPETE / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-05 22:27:25

REPETE - First capped your rhymes its not necessary but it would make your drop a much easier read. You have a decent rhyme scheme but try pushing the syllable count to at least 3-5 fam and you'll start seeing a big change in your drop next time. Your structure of your bars could do with some tightening up but other then that i see potential just its up to you if you want to improve by following some of this expo or you can just ignore it your choice but i can tell you theres is only a bit of improvement needed and you'll be winning battles easy. I see potential in the drop but needs work. [Fav Line was prob SPLAT Line]. SNOOP - Again the same as my other expo clean up that wording fam as well as building bigger concepts but seeing this is a snipe you could be going lite. What i really recommend is step up to better competition , 1 battle with a up and comer would be good once and a while fam. Thats the only way your gonna improve heavily. [Fav Line the Closer] Fairs In. High to Low, Return That Fair. APOC: Scream On'em. Voted: REPETE / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 02:51:40

Ight then .... REPETE .... I liked your intensity ya bring with ya lyrics ... But you got to up the rhyming scheme to more than just one word at the end of ya bars .... Go look in the guide section of this site for multies ... Once you have learnt and applied these you then need to look at metaphors and smilies to enable you to write better punches ... This written would prolly sound ight on a audio spit but this is text need to up the complexity of ya lyrics .... Snoopy ... Just smoother verse no big punches or anything stand out it ish from some of ya multies where abit meh half assed but you keying and sniping so i wasn't expecting some pure heat rocks .... FV as always .:X:. Voted: REPETE / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-06 06:00:46

fv Voted: REPETE / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 04:29:11

easily snoop took this battle,REPETE this what you doing is street style battling, it wont work like that here. you have to be hard hitting, making up plays and trying not to be too basic, Snoop could have done better but he saw what he had to beat and just did his verse effortlessly. look around a bit bro and see how to format a text battle verse... Voted: REPETE / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-05-07 07:26:43

Right on fellas...thx 4 the input....text battles r tuff cause i haven't figured out how to set my lines up for a punch...juss gotta keep at it.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-07 10:25:37