Easy win here. One is on another level here w/ better multis and punches. Fairs in low to low Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-02 22:45:02

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Posted on: 2013-05-03 04:19:27

Fair as always Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 07:30:00

Pretty one sided. Zan-Your concepts were a little weak and predictable. That swallowed a gun line was really corny to be honest, there was no real conceptuality in that to give it any substance. You had one or two broken multies in there. Lastly that alzheimer's concept was pretty obscure, it liked the precision and specificity of a hard hitting concept to be as high tier and effective as it needed to be. Oscaution- For one, you need to get off the that monosyllabic rhyme scheme and need to come with stuff better than played gunlines and straight dises. Straight up. Overally winner came with a more complex scheme and his lines connected. Fair's in. Keep it real. Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 15:48:29

fv gb Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 20:21:45

Shit, Voted for the wrong person. clear winner here Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 20:22:44

Loser, that was overly weak. Punch game non existent, multis.... 1 sylabelle for the entire verse, no wordplay or concepts. Spend some time looking at more experienced members, u will learn a lot from reading others work. I think u just need to work on the basics first, punches. Spend some time thinkin about ur punch and tryin to put a twist on it so its original, brainstorm ideas and then work out from that punch. Once u have the punch u can think of a set up for it, one that is relevant. Once ur comfortable with that u can get more complex with wordplay, but for now, nail those punches. Winner was stronger in every category with quite an average drop. U hold a scheme reasonably well but the content isnt really anythin that held my attention. U attempted comcepts but i donk u really pulled them off, better wordin and better set ups would have made most of your punches a lot stromger. Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 05:12:40

Loser, that was overly weak. Punch game non existent, multis.... 1 sylabelle for the entire verse, no wordplay or concepts. Spend some time looking at more experienced members, u will learn a lot from reading others work. I think u just need to work on the basics first, punches. Spend some time thinkin about ur punch and tryin to put a twist on it so its original, brainstorm ideas and then work out from that punch. Once u have the punch u can think of a set up for it, one that is relevant. Once ur comfortable with that u can get more complex with wordplay, but for now, nail those punches. Winner was stronger in every category with quite an average drop. U hold a scheme reasonably well but the content isnt really anythin that held my attention. U attempted comcepts but i donk u really pulled them off, better wordin and better set ups would have made most of your punches a lot stromger. U did enough to take this but i think u need to work on incorporating your punches into ur concepts and makin ur lines a bit more entertainin Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 05:14:27

fair vote Voted: Oscaution /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 19:36:53