good battle respect to both..one edged it with the flow..row i done seen better from u.like u was too comfortable on this one..respect though fair vote.vb Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-02 20:34:13

Dope drop bro! - Respect Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-02 21:51:34

Ight ill do a bar for bar on this one ..... J-flo3 ... Bar1 ... Few little jabs bar was Hella stretched here fam to many decorations in ya verse ya losing out on space to out rhymes in ... The row catches flow sinking a boat aint quite connecting for me i see ya concept 6/10 ... Bar2 ... Hmmm punch wasnt great either on this one kept same flow and rhyme scheme was coo but punch was meh 6/10 ... Bar3 ... Nate dog and regulate punches done been played on them gotta be more creative than that and the finisher wasnt great 6/10 .... Ok so first bar had to much filler in it for me i k ow you been out for 4 years and you can tell quit with all the decoration shit that like 07 type shit get ya lyrics together and throw punches in bunches good to see ya back tho bro ....... Right ROW ....... Bar1 ... I see ya concept but how do you. Atch a shark swimming to the flow of water??? Doesnt work for me but was ight 6/10 .... Bar2 .... Nameplay/wordplay on floe wrist was forced that domt sound the same it's close but not quite there bar was coo shit was ight tho 6.5/10 .... Bar3 .... Better nameplay here J ill works liked that good solid closer for me here 7.5/10 ..... Both had some areas to improve on but with 4 Barz its hard to commit to a flow and make it work nice little battle FV is in ..... If youd like my votes on other battles you have drop your links in my voting thread in the text lounge ... .:X:. Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 06:22:30

Y'all both did y'all thing saw one iffy multi in ones verse but punches and more clever wordplay + rebuttals took it for me Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 12:58:03

Pretty decent battle here. Jflo3- I see the concepts that you've started to form but you were lacking setups as well as a clean execution. Alot of the lines didn't have the cohesive substance to both tie your general concepts together and the basic components of each individual line. Also towards the end you had a really watered down rhyme scheme that really developed out of desperation of trying to keep the scheme. Avoid that. Row- You had some really good lines with good scheme keeping, One thing though, I didn't get how beef in the garden correlates with a slap on florist (which was worded a bit weirdly in proper context but w.e.) Didn't get the J line either but that probably was just goin over my head. Anyways overall my winner was more consistent and had concepts that were more cleanly delivered and hit harder. Fair's in. Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-03 16:31:52

I appreciate all the feedback thus far! Respect. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-03 17:02:12

fact: the weeknds nice... lol but forreal this was a nice 8... i'm goin with the one i felt was a lil more creative and had a clean flow... good shit Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 00:25:22

Ill verses...My fair vote has been casted Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 01:31:39

both exhibited nameflips and multiss. but ones multis were alot cleaner consistently and flips were executed slightly better..havent seen the other before and dude has potential Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 01:53:22

Oh, not that it matters but my name is just J-FLo. lol.. I put a 3 at the end because some cock bag already had J-FLo taken back in 07. :/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-04 02:17:28

FLO - Ok first is that decoration its not necessary but cmon we all know that decoration takes up 1 line and it was heavily in use in the 08-09 years of LB. Now to the drop, your opener was alright, i felt you stretched your opener to much which it almost decreased the punches weight as well as too much filler. Next lines were ok, you stuck with the same rhyme scheme and flow which was smooth but again i felt the concept on this one was not too good, the filler also didn't help at all. Ok your closer was cool, i liked how you structured it. 4 year absence, i can see the rust. Above Average drop. [Fav Line was the Closer] R o w - Ok the opener was ok felt the concept was everywhere but the Row & Flo3 shit you both on is not really pure genius, Right? Next lines were ok, good structure but i felt this bar was abit stretched to the punch. The punch though was ok not that heavy which could have helped with a long build up. The closer was nice and it showed the R o w i came to expect with soild name play. Similar quality drop to Flo. [Fav Line was the Closer]. I've Truly seen better from R o w and J-Flo3 showed alot of rust in this. Both were on point w/Multis, Both had a smooth read, Both could have done wih better Concepts, Set Ups & Punches. But my winner edged this with some slightly better punches. Good Battle. Fairs In. APOC: Scream On'em. Mid to High. Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 10:37:49

decent shit...more punches would be nice though..wordplay was decent in one, but slightly forced and awkward, tho the attempt was there it coulda been cleaner...stay thirsty my friends... Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-04 17:16:07

nice drop on both sides flo got it thow Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 09:18:28

Good battle bro! You got this one -Respect fam. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-05-05 13:08:31

opening bar was the decider. gb Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 15:27:24

fv gs. Voted: J-Flo3 /
Posted on: 2013-05-05 19:53:59