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Posted on: 2013-05-01 00:59:59

I could have used so much nameplay with a name like mrsupahype, at first I thought his name was Mrs up a hype LOL... anyway ones verse was better although the beginning multi was pretty stretchy, actually there were a few bad ones throughout the verse, the over all verse hit better with punches Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 01:08:42

ie buton Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 01:48:32

Both equal dope, hard to pick a winner, had to do a coin toss. Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 02:50:59

SUPA - Ok first of all i see you've been around for a while but you should know by now that capping your Multis is the preferred LB presentation style not saying its necessary but it really makes it a easier read. Ok now to your drop, the opener was poorly set up w/terrible wording. Some repetitiveness in your multis which really detracted a lot of weight from your punches. Closer is similar to your opener, shifty structure. Your Multis is questionable and poor wording really didn't help. Vocab needs to be much more polished. Concepts were there but never capitalized on it. Structure was terrible and the punches were weak. Fav line from you was the "Season the Cheque" line. Not a very good drop if this is you at your best hopefully you can prove me wrong in another battle of yours. EXE - Opener started good but i felt you stretched the Multi too far leaving the wording to be some what ...messy. Wording is your biggest enemy, try not to go over the top w/the multis and concentrate on more smoother wording and controllable multis. Punches hit a bit in some lines some interesting concepts. Structure seems fine. Vocab can be polished. Multis is questionable. Couldn't really spot a line that stood out in your drop but some had strong set ups but the execution in the punch came up short in most. Not our best drop. This is close but a winner has to be chosen. Fv In. APOC: Scream On'em Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 03:48:11

fellow members of my crew already gave a detailed expo to you guys. ill keep my brief then. Execute - the opening multi was far to strecthed and you needed to watch the syllable count on it aswell. so small punches or jabs but nothing really exciting. like i said before you need to watch your syllable count on some of your multis. but all togther a pretty decent drop no doubt. mrsupahype - need to cap your multis because its like a presentation standard thing on letsbeef and makes them stand out. no hard hitting punches and hardly anything really that was hitting your opponent. votes in Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 04:43:07

both need to improve a llot Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 06:56:28

Btw why the fuck are all apoc members voting and commenting on this....lol Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 06:57:22

fv Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-01 16:31:29

you both aint that good Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-02 15:30:24

FV Voted: mrsupahype / Execute
Posted on: 2013-05-02 22:48:40