Mc you had a nice flow in ya verse but you need to keep on topic with ya bars you seem to flip and flap between concepts during your bars you get multis which is great to see and read props on that you just need to work on metaphors and punches .... Fair is in VBF .:X:. Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-27 17:05:44

Easy choice for the winner here. One is on another level here and took this battle easily. Both need to up the creativity though. Fairs in Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-27 18:06:41

MC- im seeing some irrelevant setups, you need to make sure that you stay cohesive wit your idea until the end of the punch.. multis were aight.. punchwise, pretty straight forward disses.. no real concept/flips. SNOO P- your relavency is a lot better, especially in your second bar, where your idea was bout him being gay, then continued that idea to the punch.. only problem tho is it ended in a weak diss rather than any real concept/flip/ punchline... last bar, again relevance was alot better, startin wit you settin up about his anal tank, then finishing off wit bank deposit, load.. its a contiuous idea, that althougha bit basic, was funny and worked.. fairs in.... Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-28 15:42:23

MC- As a horrorcore verse, I liked it. I liked the flow, alot of good imagery but conceptually your verse was lacking. That's the aspect of horrorcore that really makes it somewhat non-interchangeable in text battling because you have to be descriptive and conceptual at the same time. Work on using more relavant setups that can embellish some conceptual punches you have. Snopp-You had some decent habs in there with some good rhyming but the opposite holds true as well making your verse somewhat inconsistent. You had some broke and forced rhymes (ie world's guiness record as opposed to guiness world records) you changed the scheme to fit the rhyme and that can be sketchy and is sketchy usually. In any case, my choice utilized mroe conceptual punches and was able to connect with his punches more effectively. Fair's in Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-28 18:57:49

You can't just win off your reputation snoopy. You gotta take every battle seriously. Plus you went second. Mc came with some nice stuff. Form was a lil off but most of it was nice. You snoop takes about dudes dick and ass the whole time... Gay shit isn't sick. It's gay. Voted: MC 7CEEZ™ / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-29 22:10:25