Nice drop ill get at this after work. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-19 15:17:50

Expo : Kilts Looks Like Skirts , Elias Is in the movie "Platoon" with the famous dying scene. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-20 03:40:53

i thought doomsday had way harder hits Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 13:05:24

Berry nice fv Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 17:04:02

Break down let's do it ... Aggs .. Bar1 ... Could of done with another multi to make it flow better to much filler between the multis punch was ight ... 6/10 ... Bar2 ... I get the concept but whats his brain got to do with a tree you need to have it match up other wise it's a half assed punch 5/10 ... Bar3 ... This bar was filler thats nothing but a jab in this game 4/10 ... Bar4 ... Hmmm I wish you'd stop talking football and the Tom cruise line had potential here but it didn't close very well ... 5/10 my tip is try to think more worldly and think of your audience as they are voting on ya shit also I'd say you need more than two multis per bar as your bars are full off to much filler ..... Mr doomsday ..... ... Bar1 ... I get the personal with the kilt but felt you could of worded it better it was straight opener tho 7/10 ... Bar2 ... Wordplay/nameplays just pulled it off here ... Punch was ight but a lot of filler before it connected felt you could of shortened it to hit harder still a nice bar 7/10 .... Bar3/4 .... Nice closer here was nice flowed punch connected nothing WOW but solid closer 7/10 ..... Nice battle but felt this was slightly once sided props to both respect the expo FV VBF .:X:. APOC Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 17:05:46

Pretty one sided here. Aggs- your wording was pretty awkward at times and as far as formatting punches you were pretty on point however the content was severely lacking. Work on uppin your concepts and the way you present them as far as setups. Doom- You really excelled as far as readability, although at times your lines sort of lapsed because the multies were pretty far apart. You set up our punches pretty solidly however the main punch at times lacked clarity. Lastly your last multi scheme was pretty sketchy, there was one syllable each time that didn't match up right and threw off te scheme a bit. Overall however my winner's punches connected more and definitely showed more complexity. Keep elevatin. Fairs in Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 17:16:58

Was pretty much a landslide here. One out punched the other and also took this bout in almost every category. Other needs to work on creative concepts for his punches to hit harder. Could learn a thing or two from your opponent. Fairs in though Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 18:01:28

man this was a monster post back homies thers no hope for this scottish guy he drowned from a tidal wave sweepin in... dam Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 19:43:44

I'm sure others already hit it on the nose but my choice got this with stronger punches and being better in about every aspect... Both still have plenty of elevating to do though.. Yall should take a look at some vet battles from Mikey DeNiro, RULE and DaDDiO.. Overall decent battle.. Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-20 20:26:23

In every aspect? but you give both a 5? seriously your FVC!. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-20 23:47:45

fv I felt the losing verse had potential to be better if he had harder punches and less filler, but besides that gb Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-21 12:35:49

nice from both but one brought more fire here...da winner is... Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-21 15:22:02

Fair Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-21 21:03:56

Both had decent verses. -Fair's In. No hate fella's. -Acid's Out Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-22 10:28:15

swgfdjgsdsgfs thats whats up Voted: Jakk Junior / Doomsday™
Posted on: 2013-04-22 15:24:18

Instant block ^^^ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-22 17:16:07