Fill out your bars yuyu look at your opponents verse see how he used the whole box need to up ya rhyme scheme too very basic you've got a Long way to go clear winner FV VBF .:X:. Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-15 20:14:29

I married mother nature just to get under the weather* Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-15 20:32:13

I don't like the way it's portrayed...looks... wild and distorted Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-15 20:33:13

Obvious winner, no hate. Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-15 20:35:41

Landslide. Yu, you gotta utilize the space you're given to throw more punches. Your rhymes were simple (when they actually rhymed) and you didnt have any concepts or complexity. Do some lookin around the site and reading battles for a better idea of how to win votes. Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-15 21:17:24

Winners got potential no doubt. Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-15 22:38:42

gb Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-16 04:34:52

............. Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-17 01:58:13

yu u need to put up proper instead of writing bars like u gonna spit them, text heads r very different from the audio side Voted: YuYu / Beezalini
Posted on: 2013-04-18 16:08:48