Good battle bro, good luck Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-14 05:34:45

same to you to bro Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-14 05:41:40

TEMP you have the idea w/the simple rhyme scheme but try using multis and higher syllable count, your structure is there just needs polishing with bigger concepts. I've def seen much much worst and you seem you have "potential" and i dont say that often. Just up the vocab, multi & tighten up the structure and you'll be fine. SNoopy not to sure what to expect but you did what was necessary to take this by showing experience throughout your drop, some wording problems here and there which effected the flow but you seemed to deliver more harder jabs. Fv In. RTF. - Give'm The Cold Shoulder Voted: Temp uk / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-14 05:49:14

Feelin what val was saying in his expos temp your upping ya shit each time good hustle bro snoop ya shit was ight enough to take it always a fair VBF .:X:. Voted: Temp uk / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-14 05:53:28

Honestly, this was whack. It's just that one was whacker than the other. Temp you need to use better rhyme schemes. Rhyme more than one syllable. Snoop, although your schemes were a better attempt of multi syllable rhyming they were sloppy. Try tighten them up. Both could do with trying some fresher angles as well when it comes to punching. Respect to both. Keep elevating Voted: Temp uk / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-14 05:56:22

Temp had some punches but no complex rhymes but he has the right idea..snoopy was average,nothing special but he did enough to take it though..both need some work Voted: Temp uk / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2013-04-15 11:54:48