Good luck bro Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 16:24:10

x calibur came with nice bars, but "TAKING-THIS-SA"(ESS AY) don't work. Sa anz won it for me. The fairs are in vb Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 16:27:07

Can I ask for an expo as to why you don't think the SA line don't work? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 16:34:11

expo: it doesn't work because sa isn't even a word. You should have said say, i would of felt it more. But overall your verse wasn't bad Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 16:44:01

Nevermind I take that back@calibur I see where your bars made sense. My bad. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 17:05:06

SA are two letters when pronounced they come out S . A maybe I should of put a full stop in between so y'all would of got it better .... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-13 18:21:43

Landslide for the winner. One is simply on another level and took this with smooth multis, high punch count and the line of the battle. Other needs to up the creativity and come w/ punch lines and not just multis w/ the occasional jab. Fairs in low to high Voted: SA_ANZ / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-14 15:34:35

SANNZ-alot of filler, meta . concepts were there but no flips to them at all.. 'sticks around ' like peasants do? how do they relate to each other.. if you mean they stick around because theyre really poor and cant find somewhere else to go, then its really poorly executed as a simile.. i wouldve said 'sticks around' like HOW DREAMCATCHERS MADE.. you need to get more creative fam.. rest was pretty bland, and basic... hardly any relavence that ties in each line.. XCALI- mulits were complex, so we know you got them fundamentals down.. the thing that hurts your verse is the irrelavent filler to your lines.. lets look at your second bar.. you first start wit self hype boastin bout bein here since 06, then continue the setup wit more multi filler that has no relavence to the first part, nor toward your end wordplay which is also very old and played 'flow=anything relating to piss.... as far as wordplay goes,, first nameflip you used doesnt work and sounds hella forced.. mainly becausse you say your like a 'police doctor', but what does that have to do with 'ese' or even 'essay' as another meaning?are you tryin to relate a doctor writing up an essay? or police always harrassing mexicans? very vague reference... which makes it forced.. also , if you gonna use SA, make sure you write it as an acronym.. so S.A. .and finally the last nameflip, saanz=sands another pretty played attempt.. which doesnt work mainly because if you sculpt his corpse, wouldnt he be laying down instead of standing up... this may seem like nitpickin but proper wording can make a difference in the strength of a bar...i know you rusty so hopefully this will either be a wakeup call/ or something you dont give twoshits to fix...... anyway what it comes down to it is multi complexity, and a few concept/to flip attempts that although weak, still added up as elements utilized and landed... fairs in... Voted: SA_ANZ / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-15 01:25:29

sway comments deleted but vote still stands.. even wit the piss poor expo Voted: SA_ANZ / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-15 01:27:21

Yeah ILL already hit shit on the nose.. SA_ANZ - Work on your concepts and set-ups.. Your concepts need to be fresher then your set-ups got to be relevant to your multies.. Take a look at some battles from RULE, DaDDiO and reEFer... X-Calibur - Your verse had a nice flow to it but you also have got to work on your set-ups.. You might just be rusty but your set-ups werent to strong which led to a somewhat not strong punch so make your set-ups a little more complex... Overall decent spar.. Voted: SA_ANZ / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-15 16:32:47

ANZ HAD A GOOD FLOW AN I LIKED THA RHYME SCHEME YOU WENT WITH, S-CAL HAD A VERY FORCED FIRST MULTI lol BUT ONE HE GOT INTO HIS STRIDE THOSE CREATIVE PUNCHES WERE FLOWIN......I FELT ONE COULDA DONE ALOT MORE WIT HIS MATERIAL, THA OTHER DID MORE WIT HIS CONCEPTS AN HAD TWO STANDOUT PARTS IN HIS VERSE THA TOOK THIS.....FAIR IS IN....holla Voted: SA_ANZ / X-Calibur
Posted on: 2013-04-16 11:22:53