Expo: Tyler perry wears dresses. I make her deep throat so far until my dick comes out her pussy makes her look like a tranny. How can he write a verse full of sentences when he couldnt even complete his prison sentence, hes a virgin until he gets married Virgin Marry/Mary Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:11:39

overall one came a tad bit better... Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:14:46

Had great punchlines and wordplay, Good job ak but cedits to Turbo as well . Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:19:34

thanks Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:25:11

Fair as ever Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:41:29

If you dont read my expo dont fucking vote. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-10 22:45:03

goody suffy Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 00:38:43

Decent battle here. Turbo- you were wry consistent with you multi scheme however your punches were more like jabs, in the sense that you didn't really capitalize on concepts but rather just scheming but I think the verse was structured decently well. I believe that if you take time to come uo with more creative and heavy concepts then you can be a heavyweight. Ak- your biggest problem was structure and wording. I saw your concepts and I could draw the connections HOWEVER, the way you incorporated those concepts as punches was severely lacking. You didn't seem to know how to connect the concepts and transform them in the form of a punch so it just seemed like random sentences that weren't really effective. Like that Tyler Perry line, why would he be trading with Tyler Perry, and then why would he just all the sudden ask that question? Just the way your punches came off was sort of awkward thus making them ineffective. Overall, I see potential in both but my winner seemed to have a more in depth understanding of how to form and structure punches. Keep elevatin though guys. Fairs in Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 06:12:42

One had a couple more punches than the other and did not lack consistency. Fair's In. No hate Fella's. -Acid's Out Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 10:26:31

Fuck all ya'll turbo steamrolled this pancake... no hate coz its never hate but turbo got some skills all ya'll worrying bout punches yall force em when you do forgettin bout the flow that was handed to us FUCK ALL YOU PUNCH WORRYING MAHFUCKAHS... i can throw punches like fifth dan.... Punk Mahfuckas Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 11:01:16

Both was nice but i like the first rhyming sceme nice battle no hate fair vote Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 12:24:11

just got a betterfeel from turbos flow and multies Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 12:44:20

One has potential, but needs some work with wording and better build on the concept, my winner had better punches and a smoother flow although my winner needs work too with fresher concepts and better multi use Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 19:56:19

GREAT punchlines both did amazing Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 21:54:23

fvgb Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-11 22:11:37

^^ Thanks for the intelligent vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-11 22:13:50

is it an intelligent vote when they vote for you? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-11 22:58:21

I was being sarcastic, cuz he aint give no feedback. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-11 23:00:54

Let's go turbo wards. Got to rep my crew to the fullest. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-12 00:39:34

GB Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-13 05:54:29

ak i thought had some better punches but it was close as hell Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-13 21:25:03

Punches were better Voted: Nicky Warz / LilDoDirty
Posted on: 2013-04-13 23:31:07