Fuck... **put ah bust to rest** faded ha! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-05 01:27:46

Gb!!! Fv, Vbf. Voted: Infinite Dialect / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-05 08:27:46

Pretty close battle here. Infinite- you stayed pretty consistent, however some of your concepts were pretty played and you really need to work on your wording. Alot of the verse seemed like schemin filler where most f the verse was just trying to rhyme multies with complexity, but it really just made it sound forced and awkward, so work on that. Ex- for your first few lines, I really didn't understand what you were trying to say. It upsets me because you know how to set up the punches because the way you structure blatantly says you're about to make for a clean execution but then the weight of the concept isn't there to actually qualify as a punch. Then your last two lines actually made sense and were pretty decent but you had some wording issues and it was set up very awkwardly. Overall I based my winner off consistency and who landed more punches. Fairs in Voted: Infinite Dialect / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-07 11:24:37

fvvv Voted: Infinite Dialect / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-11 22:45:16