Good Luck Bro. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 12:37:09

Yah you to flames up for grabs Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 13:31:28

Gb! Acid you definitely showed some of your best rhymes there. White, I couldn't figure all of your rhymes out but yo, you were pretty decent. Fv, no hate. Vbf. Voted: -Acid / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-04-04 13:37:43

I seen WHYT NOIZs shitty verse on a Facebook battle (I kno kinna gay in itself).. but google it or some shit. Good looks Acid. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 14:04:27

Facebook my ass send a link to this battle bitch,, these verses were written this way bcuz let's beef is the only one who would understand so get the fuck outta here with that fagit send me bars ill wordplay ya name so many diff ways you can't say it's per written dumbass Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 14:28:35

hmm gb fvv Voted: -Acid / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-04-04 14:54:13

This was a really close battle. Acid- Had some good lines in here but the wording really through your verse off. That opener could've been pretty dope but that Cosmo pain than the fairly odd parents didn't make much sense. The f.o.p don't really cause pain. Te rest of your verse was pretty much filler and the last line showed potential but again the way you worded it was super awkward. Whyte-You showed alot of potential in this verse. Your first line was killer. I think if you would've worded it slightly better it would've hit harder but you really got the whole wordplay thing down on that concept by tying concepts together. After that you kid of went downhill, your wordplay was somewhat more valid but with some of the concepts I felt no real closure and to add to that you switch rhyme schemes pretty often so it really brings out the inconsistent side of your verse as far as semi-irrelevant wordplay and structuring. My winner here just shined a little brighter with creativity and definite ability to be relavantly conceptual. I see potential in both if they were to polish their verses a little better. Fairs in. Voted: -Acid / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-04-04 16:54:58

one was jus...........fukin better, dope drop yungun. Voted: -Acid / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-04-05 09:17:07

close battle, hard to decide =O. Anyways, 1 came w/ a nice opener, I like that "cause mo/cosmo, fairy odd parents" line, that was dope. He continue'd to come w/ decent punches but his ending was kinda forced & also he lacked to rhyme and have matched multies syllables. His opponent came w/ dope wordplays, that "wrecked if i:(rectify)" one was the best, imo. He ended decent. His punches could hit harder tho, if he work on it a more. This was definitely a good battle. Both contenders stepped it up a bunch ! I read it 3 times and unfortunately I could only pick ONE winner, so the 1 who edge'd it in my opinion would go to....... Voted: -Acid / MeTa-FoRcEz
Posted on: 2013-04-08 22:23:09