#ThatArabShit Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-04 11:44:14

One was jus smoother all tha way around. couple bars from ma winner cuda been expanded on alil but enuff here to get tha nod. loser jus needs to elevate more. Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: myyk3000 / Phoenix
Posted on: 2013-04-05 09:01:48

My choice got this with stronger punches, better flow, better set-ups, stronger execution, better multies and better concepts.. His opponent could learn from my choice's bars to help him a little and also take a look at battles from reEFer, Askari and DaDDiO and try to grasp the concept to produce vet status bars.. Overall decent battle.. Voted: myyk3000 / Phoenix
Posted on: 2013-04-05 13:47:37

3000 you'll need to work all areas of your game, you got a good rhyme scheme going on but even that needs work. Potential is seen but thats all upto you. Develop bigger concepts by creating strong setups but also be careful when structuring your bars. Punches were way to soft and you had way too much filler, also another thing is to be careful not to go in and out of cypher mode, keep ALL your lines aggressive and aimed at your opponents. Better vocab would be good then the others will follow, Punches, Metas & Flow eventually. Also pick up your multi game and higher syllable rhymes and also follow the LB presentation by capping your syllable rhymes/punches it helps for a easier read. Maybe a long road of development but it pays off NIX i don't know if you just kept it simple w/the rhyme scheme and punches and went light but i guess it was enough too match and even better 3000. The flow was smooth and the structure was nice and simple, no big haymakers just hope you do get more complex w/your bars against higher tier battlers. On point w/the multis too but some name flips would have been cool. Fairly one sided in all areas. High 2 Low 5. Fv In. - Give'm The Cold Shoulder Voted: myyk3000 / Phoenix
Posted on: 2013-04-06 21:01:57

kuul bro Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-09 08:42:12